User:02barryc/medtable
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POV: "Michael the Brave united Transylvania with Wallachia and Moldavia in 1600" | NPOV: "Michael the Brave united Transylvania with Wallachia and Moldavia in 1600" | |
Comment on the links provided by Criztu: they are all vague comments of facts, and mention is made of documents that don't seem to be quotable (the largest text still says "a document" without specifying how and under which formula); the British texts appear to be directly and undiscriminately quoting Romanian nationalist POV. Gentlemen, I have given you the sources, not the perspectives on sources. I am not asking for removal of text: I am asking for uncertain-at-best things not to be casually dropped into a brief leading section as if they were the unquestionable truth. Future work should further evidence these problems in detail, but, as it is, the articles are either schematic or messy; pushovers such as the one Criztu is attempting here will only make this harder to accomplish. Dahn 10:01, 4 August 2006 (UTC) Edit Section |
28 October 1599, Michael defeats the armies of Prince Andrew Bathory, and on 1 November 1599 Michael receives the keys of Alba Iulia. 11 February 1600, treaty between Michael the Brave and Emperor Rudolph II recognizing Michael the Brave as prince of Transylvania. November 1599, the Ottoman Empire recognizes Michael as prince of Transylvania. 27 May 1600, Michael entitles himself Ruler of Transylvania Moldavia and Wallachia. Romanian Ministry of Foreign Affairs |
POV: "Romanians proclaimed union of Transylvania with Kingdom of Romania in 1918" | NPOV: "Romanians proclaimed union of Transylvania with Kingdom of Romania in 1918" | |
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At the end of War World I, romanians from Transylvania took control of the administrative apparatus in Transylvania, and the Romanian National Party deputies representing the romanians in Transylvania gathered at Alba Iulia where proclaimed Union with Romania. Romanian Ministry of Foreign Affairs |
POV: "Another traditional division of Transylvania is the Hungarian administrative system" | |
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Transylvania Lead Section explains that Transylvania at its maximum extent encompassed other historical regions too; and that the notion of a region of Transylvania also encompasses other historical regions that are not part of Transylvania proper. The formulation Another traditional division is the Hungarian administrative system i consider to be a weasel term (Historical Regions associated with Transylvania are not Traditional divisions of Transylvania, I have never heard of such thing as Traditional divisions of a historical region). Transylvania was adminstratively divided according to Administrative divisions of the Kingdom of Hungary during the time it was under administration of Hungary, and that is a matter of the Hungarian State, and belongs to the History of Transylvania as a province or part of the Kingdom of Hungary. While Historical Regions that are associated with Transylvania proper might be a recognizable thing of the present, the Administrative divisions of the Kingdom of Hungary are not a recognizable thing of the present, and have the same relevance for the lead section of Transylvania as the Administrative divisions of the Kingdom of Romania have, none.
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POV: "Another traditional division of Transylvania is the Hungarian administrative system" | |
1. The name is not exactly Transylvania, is it? 2. The name is in Latin because the goddamn chronicle is written in Latin, as the court language in the Hungarian Kingdom. 3. The chronicle is written in 1200, more than 200 years after the region was conquered by Magyars, and reference in retrospect a time when a "Transylvania", if that is indeed what the text means, would have had plenty of time to emerge. 4. If this initiative by Criztu is aimed at getting this info in the lead, I fail to see how the hell he can portray it as relevant enough, especially when mention is made of the name in the sections just a couple of lines further down. Dahn 09:52, 4 August 2006 (UTC) Edit Section | I also intend on stating it clear that the first mention of a Transylvania (Ultrasilvania) was in Gesta Hungarorum, where Gelou was defeated and his state subdued by the magyars during the 9th century Edit Section |