Talk:Re-Logic/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 17:25, 13 March 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Nannoyani (talk · contribs) 17:55, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Hi again, I'm going to review this article as well. Nannoyani (talk) 17:55, 21 March 2025 (UTC)

Summary

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

Lead

• It was founded by Andrew Spinks in 2011. The company... → Founded by Andrew Spinks in 2011, the company... - Better to not have a choppy, short sentence.
  •  Done
• ...for developing and publishing Terraria, a 2D action-adventure sandbox video game, in 2011. → ...for developing and publishing the 2D action-adventure sandbox video game Terraria. - Smoother phrasing and unnecessary date removal.
  •  Done
• ...however, the game was canceled due to them not being satisfied with its development. → ...but the game was canceled because Re-Logic was not satisfied with its development progress. - Improve clarity.
  •  Done

History

• considering that a beta version of the game was leaked to the public. → as a beta version was leaked to the public. - More concise.
  •  Done
• its development → Terraria's development - Less-confusing, for me atleast.
  •  Done
• However, in 2013, the development resumed → However, in 2013, development resumed - Unnecessary "the".
  •  Done
• The game was later also → The game was later - Remove redundant "also".
  •  Done
• The Nintendo 3DS version was released in 2015, while the Wii U version was released in 2016. → The Nintendo 3DS version was launched in 2015, followed by the Wii U version in 2016. - Remove redundancy.
  •  Done
• the game developed by Quadro Delta. → a game developed by Quadro Delta - Change awkward phrasing.
  •  Done
• when they were replaced by Pipeworks Studios. - I'm a bit confused here, did they replace Re-Logic and or Engine Software?
  •  Done
• Re-Logic's vice-president Whitney Spinks asserted [..] adding that the company would never 'sell [their] souls' for any amount of money. → Re-Logic's vice-president Whitney Spinks commented [..] stating that the company would never 'sell [their] souls' for any amount of money. - MOS:SAID.
  •  Done
• In response to the suspension, Re-Logic announced the cancellation of the Google Stadia version of Terraria. → As a result, Re-Logic canceled the Google Stadia version of Terraria. - More concise.
  •  Done
• Unity Engine announced a royalty policy called Unity Runtime Fee, calculated per installation and charged monthly, if the product reaches specific revenue and lifetime installation thresholds. → In September 2023, Unity announced a royalty policy called the Unity Runtime Fee, which imposed charges per installation once a product met specific revenue and lifetime installation thresholds. - Sentences reads awkward.
  •  Done

Games

Nothing to comment on here.

Source spot-check

Numbers are chosen by RNG:

• 3 - Good

• 7 - Good

• 11 - Good

• 14 - Good

• 17 - Good

• 21 - Good

• 23 - Good

• 26 - Good

• 30 - Good

• 37 - Good

Sorry for my absence for a bit, but anyway, this article passes! Congratulations once again. Nannoyani (talk) 08:36, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

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