Talk:How Do I Look

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self-promotion

Much of this article reads as self-promotion by the filmmakers, with most claims either:

unsourced,
cited but with sources that don't support the claim, or
cited with discussion about the ball scene in general but not the film.

I do not have the energy right now to rewrite this, as I just spent all of it trying to rewrite the similarly poorly sourced and overly promotional article on the filmmaker himself, so I am asking someone to please clean this page up. Thank you. -72.192.169.23 (talk) 02:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]