User contributions for Xprrt5

16 July 2021

• 22:0522:05, 16 July 2021 diff hist +1,014 Talk:Glioblastoma →A horrendous error that was in the article for years: new section Tag: Reverted
• 21:5821:58, 16 July 2021 diff hist −9 Glioblastoma →Epidemiology: fixed the same horrendous error
• 21:3421:34, 16 July 2021 diff hist +4 Glioblastoma fixed an absolutely ridiculous misrepresentation of what the source says.
• 09:5609:56, 16 July 2021 diff hist −14 Delamination interrupting with jargon is very poor style
• 09:5509:55, 16 July 2021 diff hist −4 Vic Morrow →Death
• 09:5409:54, 16 July 2021 diff hist +13 Twilight Zone: The Movie Plot section is far too long Tag: Reverted
• 09:5209:52, 16 July 2021 diff hist +8 Twilight Zone: The Movie How is it possible that people do not know that you are supposed to write formally in an encyclopaedia?
• 09:4909:49, 16 July 2021 diff hist −10 Vic Morrow NPOV

15 July 2021

• 10:2310:23, 15 July 2021 diff hist −38 Cadence →Common classifications: WP:NOTE and removed opinion
• 10:2110:21, 15 July 2021 diff hist −3 Cadence improved poor writing
• 10:2010:20, 15 July 2021 diff hist −12 Cadence Articles should not start with a definition copied from elsewhere. We write in our own words, obviously.

14 July 2021

• 22:5822:58, 14 July 2021 diff hist −16 Anchorman: The Legend of Ron Burgundy →Plot: unnecessary link
• 22:5722:57, 14 July 2021 diff hist −454 Anchorman: The Legend of Ron Burgundy →Plot: restored old plot section from before an anonymous editor took it upon themselves to violate multiple style guidelines
• 21:4721:47, 14 July 2021 diff hist +299 Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors →Today's OTD Tag: Reverted
• 13:4613:46, 14 July 2021 diff hist −244 DX Cancri fixed a lot of poor writing, unidiomatic English, incorrect style
• 13:3813:38, 14 July 2021 diff hist +5 SN 2014J →Physical properties
• 13:3813:38, 14 July 2021 diff hist −59 SN 2014J →Physical properties: "astronomers hope" is press-release filler, not encyclopaedic content.
• 13:3513:35, 14 July 2021 diff hist −14 SN 2014J →Physical properties: not an intuitive link at all
• 13:3413:34, 14 July 2021 diff hist −52 SN 2014J →Discovery: names of people who were nearby when it was discovered are not relevant
• 13:2113:21, 14 July 2021 diff hist −1,081 SN 2011dh removed a lot of absolute rubbish - a mixture of unencyclopaedic, years out of date, irrelevant and very likely copied and pasted from somewhere
• 09:2009:20, 14 July 2021 diff hist +112 Denise Nickerson improved lead
• 09:0209:02, 14 July 2021 diff hist −52 Denise Nickerson →Illness and death: So many major flaws in such a short section. improved.
• 08:5608:56, 14 July 2021 diff hist −63 Denise Nickerson →Personal life: rm uncited trivia
• 08:5608:56, 14 July 2021 diff hist −450 Denise Nickerson →Commercials: so badly written as to be unintelligible, and says nothing of interest. Recording adverts is not unusual and nobody has ever imagined that the people who record adverts are devoted users of the products

13 July 2021

• 17:3317:33, 13 July 2021 diff hist +15 Fly (Breaking Bad) →Plot: as seems to be the case for all Breaking Bad episode articles, there were grammar errors, needless concealments of surnames, and informal contractions.
• 17:3017:30, 13 July 2021 diff hist −43 Abiquiu (Breaking Bad) →Plot: fixed misstatements, poor writing, unnecessary concealing of surnames
• 13:4013:40, 13 July 2021 diff hist −6 West Nile virus it has already been named
• 13:3813:38, 13 July 2021 diff hist −13 West Nile virus redundant
• 13:3813:38, 13 July 2021 diff hist −120 West Nile virus replace a load of unnecessary non-breaking spaces with normal ones
• 11:2511:25, 13 July 2021 diff hist −14 m List of periodic comets No edit summary
• 11:2311:23, 13 July 2021 diff hist +2 List of numbered comets removed incorrect "i.e.", formatted numbers
• 08:1408:14, 13 July 2021 diff hist −146 Half Measures →Plot: fixed a lot of really poor writing
• 08:1008:10, 13 July 2021 diff hist −109 Full Measure (Breaking Bad) →Plot: fixed tonnes of instances of lazy, poor quality writing
• 07:4207:42, 13 July 2021 diff hist −40 Me and a Gun →Background: removed editorialising
• 07:3507:35, 13 July 2021 diff hist +10 Me and a Gun →Background: after you have mentioned someone once, repeating their surname is jarring, repeating their full name even more so. Why would anyone write in this way?
• 07:3207:32, 13 July 2021 diff hist −13 Me and a Gun →Background: inaccurate
• 07:3207:32, 13 July 2021 diff hist −97 Me and a Gun →Background: irrelevant speculation

12 July 2021

• 22:0822:08, 12 July 2021 diff hist −27 List of The Outer Limits (1995 TV series) episodes and some more
• 22:0322:03, 12 July 2021 diff hist +62 List of The Outer Limits (1995 TV series) episodes Fixed *dozens* of contractions. Why would anyone write in this unencyclopaedic way?
• 21:5421:54, 12 July 2021 diff hist −883 The Sixth Finger removed unencyclopaedic text
• 21:5321:53, 12 July 2021 diff hist −335 The Man Who Was Never Born →Legacy: no legacy is described in this section. Rewrote what there was in an encyclopaedic style
• 21:5121:51, 12 July 2021 diff hist −986 The Man Who Was Never Born fixed grammar errors, removed unencyclopaedic text
• 21:2221:22, 12 July 2021 diff hist −43 Peloton →Strategy: removed awful writing
• 21:1921:19, 12 July 2021 diff hist −229 Cincinnati →International relations: sentence makes no sense and is uncited anyway
• 21:1821:18, 12 July 2021 diff hist −6 Cincinnati meaningless adjective

11 July 2021

• 13:4713:47, 11 July 2021 diff hist +616 User talk:Radambc →Problematic editing: new section
• 11:0711:07, 11 July 2021 diff hist −15 Seven Nation Army →Composition and lyrics: rewrote more shockingly bad text
• 11:0611:06, 11 July 2021 diff hist −71 Seven Nation Army →Composition and lyrics: rewrote some truly atrocious text
• 10:4710:47, 11 July 2021 diff hist −62 Abiy Ahmed →Rise to power: improved ungrammatical, non-neutral writing
• 10:4310:43, 11 July 2021 diff hist −105 Abiy Ahmed fixed grammar errors and failures to define acronyms