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05:0005:00, 5 May 2025 diff hist +8 m What would Jesus do? No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
04:5704:57, 5 May 2025 diff hist +517 Silver as an investment Added some additive information about silver being a byproduct of metal mining, constrasted with gold. current Tag: Visual edit
04:3904:39, 5 May 2025 diff hist +668 La Casa Pacifica Contextualized the Western White House versus other presidential retreats. current Tag: Visual edit
04:3404:34, 5 May 2025 diff hist +414 San Clemente, California Added 2025 regional income numbers. Tags: Reverted Visual edit

20:1820:18, 28 April 2025 diff hist +2,285 Defined benefit pension plan →US laws and regulations: Added Additional Important Legal Provisions as well as US Laws and Regulations. Polished grammar. current Tag: Visual edit

06:2106:21, 30 December 2024 diff hist +1,714 Distributed Social Networking Protocol Clarity on technical and platform differences between the core DSNP and the platforms that currently are still operating that espouse the core decentralization around data ownership. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
05:4105:41, 30 December 2024 diff hist +2,007 Family office Added in-depth context to the differentiation between single and multi family offices. Tag: Visual edit

04:1804:18, 9 September 2024 diff hist +157 m What would Jesus do? Clarity on Charles Sheldon's novel publication details and grammar corrections. Tag: Visual edit
03:5603:56, 9 September 2024 diff hist −6 m Calcialiment More formal and grammatically correct, clarity and conciseness, flow, and removing redundancies. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

23:3523:35, 5 September 2024 diff hist −461 m Jean, bastard of Luxembourg I couldn’t locate the exact citation pages I had noted earlier. Tags: references removed Visual edit
23:3123:31, 5 September 2024 diff hist +206 User talk:TorreyTree →Clarification: Reply Tag: Reply
04:2804:28, 5 September 2024 diff hist −1 OWOX misspelling Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
04:2604:26, 5 September 2024 diff hist +275 m Business Intelligence 2.0 Real-time data integration point and application in industries. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
04:2404:24, 5 September 2024 diff hist −112 m Code Camp Active voice, conciseness, simplified structure, and clarity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
04:1904:19, 5 September 2024 diff hist −18 m .web Adding correct capitalizations, comma to clarify a non-restrictive clause, eliminated redundancy, improves clarity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
04:1204:12, 5 September 2024 diff hist −5 m Automatic transmission fluid Adding a comma before a dependent clause, made a word a single word because it's a compound adjective, and changing the tone from passive to active. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

23:4623:46, 4 September 2024 diff hist +1,354 N User:TorreyTree Sharing the rationale I have for contributing to Wikipedia as vigorously as I do. current Tag: Visual edit
23:4423:44, 4 September 2024 diff hist +477 m Jean, bastard of Luxembourg Using citations to support the historical details in this text about Jean, Lord of Haubourdin Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
23:2623:26, 4 September 2024 diff hist −12 m Hamakor Edited for readability, formality, tense consistency, gender neutrality, correct hyphenation, more precise terms, conciseness, and clarity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
23:2023:20, 4 September 2024 diff hist −42 m HIE of One smoother flow and clarity, professional tone, Keep tense consistent with the rest of the passage, and defining relative clauses. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
23:1423:14, 4 September 2024 diff hist +1 m Monday.com Tone adjustment to professional tone in referencing geographies and financing rounds. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit