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08:2708:27, 10 July 2022 diff hist +9 Green Monster →Overview: Previous sentence was nonsensical. The short proximity to home plate is not the feature that would reduce home runs, but rather the height. The distance would in fact have the opposite effect if not for (offset by) the height Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

00:3900:39, 2 May 2022 diff hist −109 McKinsey & Company →Influence: Doesn’t belong. Why does Tony Blair warrant an awkward, abrupt sentence when McKinsey alumni have served in numerous government administrations across the world, not to mention in the country of its origin (the United States)? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

04:3104:31, 10 April 2022 diff hist +46 McKinsey & Company Restored original purpose of the sentence (does not have meaning and is not a true statement without mention of advanced, non-business degrees— the original sentence) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

04:4604:46, 18 March 2022 diff hist −1 McKinsey & Company Unnecessary comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
04:4504:45, 18 March 2022 diff hist +36 McKinsey & Company Final restoration of opening paragraph. James McKinsey’s vocation is relevant. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
04:4304:43, 18 March 2022 diff hist +96 McKinsey & Company Reversed another unnecessary revision. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
04:4004:40, 18 March 2022 diff hist +493 McKinsey & Company Removal of long-standing text was unnecessary. This is relevant to the firm in a rankings-sensitive industry, a la business schools (the firm’s most active recruiting ground). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
04:3404:34, 18 March 2022 diff hist −21 McKinsey & Company Removed subjective, non-cited, and grammatically incorrect recent revision. Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile web edit

03:1103:11, 13 November 2021 diff hist −2 McKinsey & Company →Role in opioid epidemic: The quote is of the NYT article, which does not attribute the phrasing as a quote (of the documents/email cited). If quotation marks are to be used here, the sentence should identify the New York Times as the author. Without such specification, the quote is implied as attributed to McKinsey— which is critically misleading on such a sensitive and tragic topic. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit