User contributions for Spike0xFF

25 September 2013

• 16:4616:46, 25 September 2013 diff hist +26 m Brendan the Navigator →Possible link to North America: linked to wikipage on the suite by Davey, and renamed link from 'Suite' to 'Voyage'. (Both are used, but Voyage more commonly.)

1 September 2013

• 00:5500:55, 1 September 2013 diff hist +9 m How the Mind Works →Reception: 'has wrote an entire chapter' was both ungrammatical and incorrect. Tag: Visual edit

24 August 2013

• 19:0119:01, 24 August 2013 diff hist −925 Universal language →Mythological universal languages: deleted incoherent paragraph about Chinese being universal - poorly written, no citations, not neutral POV, original research (to be charitable.) If you are the author, happy to discuss how to rewrite. Tag: Visual edit

5 July 2013

• 16:2616:26, 5 July 2013 diff hist +72 Tooth enamel Simplified the language of the 1st sentence and para to suit a general reader. Promoted a few more broad-interest facts into the first para Demoted the bit about shark denticles to the 'other organisms' section. Tag: Visual edit

16 May 2013

• 21:1421:14, 16 May 2013 diff hist +329 m Talk:Interpolation →diagrams

13 February 2013

• 16:0316:03, 13 February 2013 diff hist +834 m Talk:Herkimer diamond No edit summary
• 15:5415:54, 13 February 2013 diff hist +61 m Herkimer diamond just some grammar tweaks, and cross-linking a couple of terms.

29 December 2012

• 02:5402:54, 29 December 2012 diff hist +1,007 m Talk:Valerie Plame →Considering proposing for deletion per WP:PSEUDO

2 December 2012

• 22:3622:36, 2 December 2012 diff hist +489 Lactase Added an introductory paragraph in what I hope is plain English, at least, relatively free of technical jargon.

10 October 2012

• 22:2622:26, 10 October 2012 diff hist +466 m Talk:Hyperthymic temperament →Evaluation for Psych 101
• 22:2322:23, 10 October 2012 diff hist +320 m Hyperthymic temperament added an 'entry point' reference, someplace to get started if you want to read the literature
• 22:1422:14, 10 October 2012 diff hist −401 Hyperthymic temperament I tried to purge the specialist jargon and summarize it in (relatively) ordinary English without losing the essential "we don't know, nobody knows" message.
• 22:0522:05, 10 October 2012 diff hist +235 m Hyper trying to improve the explanation of the technical/scientific prefix. It's commonly used outside physics and engineering, e.g. medicine.

16 August 2012

• 03:1503:15, 16 August 2012 diff hist −5 m Ratatouille (film) →Critical reception: last sentence was ungrammatical.

31 July 2012

• 20:3020:30, 31 July 2012 diff hist +4 m Winston →Places: I didn't know what a "census-designated place" was so I hyperlinked the first occurrence.

12 July 2012

• 16:4816:48, 12 July 2012 diff hist +37 m Rosenberg Fund for Children improved the 'source' for the block quote.
• 16:4516:45, 12 July 2012 diff hist +76 Rosenberg Fund for Children Deleted the part from 'yet they still believes' Terrible grammar, and I can't find the claimed supporting material on the RFC website. Any continuing dispute about guilt of Julius and Ethel Rosenberg seems peripheral, at best, to *this* article.

2 July 2012

• 02:3502:35, 2 July 2012 diff hist −289 m Windows Image Acquisition →Overview: Removed the 'WIA is said to be more flexible..." paragraph - it was mostly meaningless, except for the parts that were incorrect.
• 02:3402:34, 2 July 2012 diff hist +435 m Windows Image Acquisition Undid revision 500273881 by Spike0xFF (talk) Didn't realize I was duplicating the overview. Sorry.
• 02:3102:31, 2 July 2012 diff hist +132 m Windows Image Acquisition →External links: Added ref to Microsoft page on WIA 2.0
• 02:2902:29, 2 July 2012 diff hist −435 Windows Image Acquisition Removed the "WIA is said to be more flexible..." paragraph (which, where it had any discernible meaning at all, was incorrect.) Rewrote the intro para to be more to the point.

2 May 2012

• 16:1516:15, 2 May 2012 diff hist +1,604 Aerosolization I encountered the medical usage, and the page on 'aerosol' was too general and oriented toward atmospheric chemistry/physics.

9 January 2012

• 19:4419:44, 9 January 2012 diff hist +264 Content Management Interoperability Services rewrote first sentence, and part of first para, to more clearly define what CMIS is. Added more wikilinks.

2 December 2011

• 16:0716:07, 2 December 2011 diff hist +22 m Murder of Kitty Genovese →Public reaction: corrected spelling of provocateur and wikilinked it.

26 October 2011

• 14:0814:08, 26 October 2011 diff hist +11 m Windows Forms noted the common abbreviation 'WinForms' in the intro sentence.

1 October 2011

• 15:4715:47, 1 October 2011 diff hist −156 m Amsterdam Entrepôt →The entrepôt system: put parentheses around a parenthetical comment ;-) and general streamlining.

3 July 2011

• 01:1601:16, 3 July 2011 diff hist +4 m McDonald's hyperlinked first mention of 'hamburger'

2 July 2011

• 09:0309:03, 2 July 2011 diff hist +332 Talk:Estimated sign No edit summary
• 08:4808:48, 2 July 2011 diff hist −123 m Valerie Sinitsin edit for flow, deleted 404 reference-link to 2008 russian junior etc
• 08:2308:23, 2 July 2011 diff hist +59 Protests against early modern witch trials hyperlinking, cleaned up the intro some, mainly deleting redundant words.
• 07:4307:43, 2 July 2011 diff hist +4 m Emma Moynihan hyperlinked 'netball' - I had no clue what it was.
• 07:1007:10, 2 July 2011 diff hist −35 m Mount Dale removed joke about "Mount Chip", not that it wasn't good for a chuckle. If there IS a Mount Chip (google can't find it), please link to the Wikipedia entry.

26 June 2011

• 06:3106:31, 26 June 2011 diff hist −114 m International Consumer Research & Testing consolidated and updated number of members and countries, per ICRT website
• 05:5605:56, 26 June 2011 diff hist −22 m Honeydew, California →Transportation: just some tweaks that I think improve flow, couple of wrong word choices

25 June 2011

• 16:0016:00, 25 June 2011 diff hist +8 m Lúrint Ó Lachtnáin oops, my mistake - need the triple quotes around the subject. also made temporalities a wikipedia link.
• 15:5615:56, 25 June 2011 diff hist −65 m Lúrint Ó Lachtnáin more clean-up, standard date formats, remove extra single-quote.
• 15:4315:43, 25 June 2011 diff hist +35 m Lúrint Ó Lachtnáin moving things around to improve readability
• 15:2815:28, 25 June 2011 diff hist −25 m Magic to Do I think I made the last sentence flow a bit better.
• 15:1515:15, 25 June 2011 diff hist −9 m Ogosta oops - and similarly, pollution is caused more by farms than farmers.
• 15:1315:13, 25 June 2011 diff hist −71 m Ogosta a bit of syntax, and presumably, pollution is caused more by factories than by their owners ;-)

18 September 2009

• 08:1308:13, 18 September 2009 diff hist +1,936 Talk:Socratic questioning just thinking out loud late at night...

17 September 2009

• 01:2901:29, 17 September 2009 diff hist +2,652 N Talk:Psycholinguist propose to replace with a redirect

30 August 2009

• 20:5920:59, 30 August 2009 diff hist −300 Feng shui →Current developments: removed meaningless last sentence, distribute its refs within section. The whole article is a mess, isn't it...

19 August 2008

• 19:4719:47, 19 August 2008 diff hist −48 m German bombing of Rotterdam removed some unclear or redundant language, corrected grammar.

15 August 2008

• 19:2119:21, 15 August 2008 diff hist +15 m FN F2000 →FS2000 Tactical: hyperlinked 'slam fires', threw in a para break for readability.

11 June 2008

• 08:3408:34, 11 June 2008 diff hist −139 m Iullus Antonius →Civil war: comma cleanup, added missing ref to Octavian, trying to disambiguate all the pronouns.

4 May 2008

• 17:2417:24, 4 May 2008 diff hist +4 m Masada made the first 'circumvallation' in body text into a wiki-link or whatever you call it. The one in the image caption is too obscure.
• 17:2117:21, 4 May 2008 diff hist −2 m Masada 'historically accuracy' => 'historical accuracy'

22 April 2008

• 19:3919:39, 22 April 2008 diff hist −7 m Localhost changed 'instantbrowser' whatever that is, to 'browser'

2 April 2008

• 02:4302:43, 2 April 2008 diff hist −713 Working directory minor clean-up. Deleted rules section which I think belongs in the technical documentation of your OS of choice.