User contributions for Raspberryonfrog

24 March 2023

• 01:1001:10, 24 March 2023 diff hist −775 Revision (writing) deleted because it was added to reflection section Tag: Visual edit
• 01:1001:10, 24 March 2023 diff hist +15 Revision (writing) moved sections from lower in the article to lead section Tag: Visual edit
• 01:0701:07, 24 March 2023 diff hist +2,992 Revision (writing) added new collaboration section Tag: Visual edit
• 01:0601:06, 24 March 2023 diff hist −850 Revision (writing) deleted and included in the new collaboration section Tag: Visual edit
• 01:0301:03, 24 March 2023 diff hist −1,338 Revision (writing) removed and included in the new collaboration section Tag: Visual edit
• 01:0101:01, 24 March 2023 diff hist +13 User:Raspberryonfrog/Revision (writing) fixed errors current Tag: Visual edit
• 00:5900:59, 24 March 2023 diff hist +2,165 Revision (writing) adding new material that blends writing moved from the lead Tag: Visual edit

19 March 2023

• 01:4301:43, 19 March 2023 diff hist +41 User:Raspberryonfrog/Revision (writing) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 01:3901:39, 19 March 2023 diff hist −659 User:Raspberryonfrog/Revision (writing) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 01:1501:15, 19 March 2023 diff hist +8,453 User:Raspberryonfrog/sandbox I rephrased the introduction and removed unnecessary quotes. Then I discussed how revision is found within the writing process. For the body paragraphs, I compared the revision process to an article about teaching two kinds of thinking by teaching writing. I made the connection between reflection and revision. I brought attention to the idea of collaboration during the revision process. current Tags: Possible self promotion in userspace Visual edit

13 March 2023

• 23:2023:20, 13 March 2023 diff hist +3,932 N User:Raspberryonfrog/Revision ←Created page with '=== Lead === In writing, revision is the process of rearranging, adding, or removing paragraphs, sentences, or words. Writers may revise their writing after completing a draft or during the composing process. Many of the strategies associated with editing are used in revision, but it can also entail larger conceptual shifts in terms of purpose, audience, and content. Writers can go through multiple rounds of revisions before they reach a final draft.  "Few...' current Tag: Visual edit
• 18:0918:09, 13 March 2023 diff hist +4,348 N User:Raspberryonfrog/Revision (writing) ←Created page with '== Article Draft == === Lead === In writing, revision is the process of rearranging, adding, or removing paragraphs, sentences, or words. Writers may revise their writing after completing a draft or during the composing process. Many of the strategies associated with editing are used in revision, but it can also entail larger conceptual shifts in terms of purpose, audience, and content. Writers can go through multiple rounds of revisions before they reach...' Tag: Visual edit

28 February 2023

• 00:1300:13, 28 February 2023 diff hist +22 Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/UC Santa Barbara/Writ 2 - Academic Writing (Winter 2023) Updating course from dashboard.wikiedu.org Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
• 00:1300:13, 28 February 2023 diff hist +491 Talk:Revision (writing) Update Writ 2 - Academic Writing assignment details Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]

31 January 2023

• 21:5321:53, 31 January 2023 diff hist +40 Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/UC Santa Barbara/Writ 2 - Academic Writing (Winter 2023) Updating course from dashboard.wikiedu.org Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
• 21:5321:53, 31 January 2023 diff hist +33 N User:Raspberryonfrog/sandbox adding {{dashboard.wikiedu.org sandbox}} Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
• 21:5321:53, 31 January 2023 diff hist +199 N User talk:Raspberryonfrog adding {{dashboard.wikiedu.org talk course link}} Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
• 21:5321:53, 31 January 2023 diff hist +197 N User:Raspberryonfrog User has enrolled in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/UC_Santa_Barbara/Writ_2_-_Academic_Writing_(Winter_2023). current Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]