User contributions for Kevoreilly

22 December 2009

• 14:2014:20, 22 December 2009 diff hist +1,096 Talk:Retrospective diagnoses of autism →Error of meaning in use of word 'diagnoses' in second sentence.: new section

6 October 2009

• 19:3119:31, 6 October 2009 diff hist −1 m US Airways Flight 1549 And a second in the same sentence.
• 19:2719:27, 6 October 2009 diff hist −1 m US Airways Flight 1549 Removal of comma which was incorrectly placed in sentence, re

5 October 2009

• 12:5412:54, 5 October 2009 diff hist +204 Talk:Myxomatosis →CATLUM?: new section

21 September 2009

• 22:0422:04, 21 September 2009 diff hist −5 m Talk:Air France Flight 447 →Velocity vs Acceleration
• 22:0322:03, 21 September 2009 diff hist +1,151 Talk:Air France Flight 447 →Velocity vs Acceleration: new section

1 July 2009

• 22:0422:04, 1 July 2009 diff hist −610 Talk:Linda Ham It was a mistake to make this post, so I removed it! Apologies.
• 22:0222:02, 1 July 2009 diff hist +610 Talk:Linda Ham →What could have been done to save Columbia?: new section

10 June 2009

• 17:4617:46, 10 June 2009 diff hist +1,024 Talk:Elephant →Elephant Speed: new section

5 April 2009

• 09:2209:22, 5 April 2009 diff hist +378 Talk:Developed country →The word 'Criteria' is plural, but it is used as singular.: new section

29 January 2009

• 00:5000:50, 29 January 2009 diff hist +1 Saba Douglas-Hamilton Moved sentence beginning "Saba is one of a new generation..." to above the section on criticism as this is where it belongs.
• 00:4800:48, 29 January 2009 diff hist +513 Talk:Saba Douglas-Hamilton No edit summary

16 January 2009

• 00:2200:22, 16 January 2009 diff hist +1,235 Talk:Killing of Oscar Grant No edit summary

14 January 2009

• 15:1615:16, 14 January 2009 diff hist +5 m Women's suffrage in the United Kingdom →Early political movement: Grammatical fault in "her name had added to the election register", inserted 'been' as the name had been added.
• 15:1515:15, 14 January 2009 diff hist 0 m Women's suffrage in the United Kingdom →Early political movement: Correction of plural to singular in sentence beginning "Lily Maxwell was the first women to vote..."

13 January 2009

• 00:1500:15, 13 January 2009 diff hist −2 m Slumdog Millionaire →Critical reception: Corrected minor grammatical fault in "the distinctly demonization" changing it to "the distinct demonization".

9 January 2009

• 00:1000:10, 9 January 2009 diff hist −50 Michael Johnson (sprinter) →The world's fastest man: Removed sentence "No one has actually clocked a faster time since." as this is no longer true, since Usain Bolt has clocked a faster time at the 2008 Olympics.
• 00:0600:06, 9 January 2009 diff hist −75 Michael Johnson (sprinter) Removal of blatantly false and ridiculous peak speed claim.
• 00:0600:06, 9 January 2009 diff hist +938 Talk:Michael Johnson (sprinter) Removal of blatantly false and ridiculous peak speed claim.

7 January 2009

• 11:3411:34, 7 January 2009 diff hist +3 m Bankruptcy in the United Kingdom →Bankruptcy in England and Wales: Grammatical correction, the word 'is' was missing from "he may not raise credit without informing the person from whom he borrowing....".

13 November 2008

• 17:2817:28, 13 November 2008 diff hist +4 m Usain Bolt Added 'own' to the sentence describing Michael Johnson's record to add clarity as to whom 'his' actually refers to; Johnson not Bolt.

21 October 2008

• 12:2112:21, 21 October 2008 diff hist +1 m Slim Shady EP 'lyrics' was spelt wrong.

9 October 2008

• 10:4610:46, 9 October 2008 diff hist −9 SEX (computing) Miscellaneous correction of appalling grammar ("computers does" and the like)
• 10:4010:40, 9 October 2008 diff hist +2 m SEX (computing) Possessive apostrophes missing from "computer's" and "CPU's" in second sentence.

4 September 2008

• 20:4720:47, 4 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Clubfoot A space was missing between words!
• 11:1711:17, 4 September 2008 diff hist −1 m Bertie Smalls The sentence "A good police force, is one that catches more criminals than it employs." does not need nor should it have a comma! I have removed it.

2 September 2008

• 16:3416:34, 2 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Bonobo Fixed a small grammatical error where the first and second Congo wars were written as if they were singular with 'has' rather than the correct plural 'have'.

18 July 2008

• 11:4511:45, 18 July 2008 diff hist 0 m Talk:Destroying angel →Article Source
• 11:4511:45, 18 July 2008 diff hist +210 Talk:Destroying angel →Article Source
• 11:4311:43, 18 July 2008 diff hist +274 Talk:Destroying angel →delicious

6 July 2008

• 20:5520:55, 6 July 2008 diff hist −1 m World War II Removed the grammatically incorrect apostrophe from "the Nazi's" which is plural not possessive!

13 March 2008

• 18:0218:02, 13 March 2008 diff hist +1,103 Talk:Dyslexia No edit summary

11 March 2008

• 10:4010:40, 11 March 2008 diff hist +346 Talk:Anger No edit summary

21 February 2008

• 21:3921:39, 21 February 2008 diff hist −111 Voiced uvular trill Removed the sentence "Since I can't write in the table, please kindly put this in the table when you see it:". This poor edit should at most have been added to the discussion.

15 February 2008

• 10:2510:25, 15 February 2008 diff hist +687 Talk:Dempsey (dog) No edit summary

6 January 2008

• 01:4601:46, 6 January 2008 diff hist +7 m Harsh Times (film) Inserted acronym 'PTSD' in brackets after full expression 'post traumatic stress disorder' as it appears later without having been properly defined.

2 January 2008

• 16:2616:26, 2 January 2008 diff hist +997 Talk:Sleep No edit summary

1 January 2008

• 20:3120:31, 1 January 2008 diff hist −6 m Ronnie O'Sullivan The following sentence is badly written : "He chose to do this out of fear that he would say something that could he would later regret." I have therefore removed the word 'could'.

29 December 2007

• 16:0816:08, 29 December 2007 diff hist −230 Talk:Emulator No edit summary
• 16:0716:07, 29 December 2007 diff hist +127 N User:Kevoreilly ←Created page with 'Please contact me on kevoreilly (at) ntlworld (dot) com if you have any feedback on any of the edits I have made! Thanks, Kev' current
• 16:0316:03, 29 December 2007 diff hist +914 Talk:Emulator No edit summary

27 December 2007

• 21:0421:04, 27 December 2007 diff hist −4 Sweeney Todd No edit summary
• 21:0421:04, 27 December 2007 diff hist +921 Talk:Sweeney Todd No edit summary

23 December 2007

• 13:5113:51, 23 December 2007 diff hist −9 m Hassanal Bolkiah Removed the word 'However' from the beginning of the final paragraph in the 'Motor Cars' section as it is out of place.

5 December 2007

• 10:3910:39, 5 December 2007 diff hist +18 m Poll tax riots Changed the word 'it' in "the demonstrations together with the general opposition to it" to 'the Community Charge' as it was quite unclear what the article 'it' referred to, and thus read badly.
• 10:3410:34, 5 December 2007 diff hist −1 m Poll tax riots Correction of bad grammar in "many people's instincts was to....". Changed 'instincts' to singular.

9 November 2007

• 19:5419:54, 9 November 2007 diff hist +70 Talk:Sicilian Mafia →Bad Sentence!
• 19:5319:53, 9 November 2007 diff hist +442 Talk:Sicilian Mafia No edit summary