User contributions for Jimmu1

12 September 2025

• 21:4821:48, 12 September 2025 diff hist +283 m Galaxy cluster Added a journal citation for the statement about shockwaves and gas heating during protocluster formation. Tag: Visual edit
• 21:2021:20, 12 September 2025 diff hist +285 m Globular cluster Just providing a journal citation for the fact that pulsars are often found in globular clusters :) Tag: Visual edit
• 20:5820:58, 12 September 2025 diff hist −7,289 Yousef Hussain Kamal Al Emadi This one was really bad (lol) - almost all of the citations were nonexistent websites, and it contained a ton of repetition and overly promotional content - it read like it was written by an overly proud family member. I cleaned it up, removed duplicate content and unsourced claims, and and also added some new sources, such as Kamal's role in the 2001 WTO event described. The source book has a picture of him with one of the Chinese leaders! Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 19:5019:50, 12 September 2025 diff hist +14 Cabal Online Link suggestions feature: 1 link added. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Suggested: add links

5 September 2025

• 13:0313:03, 5 September 2025 diff hist −1,261 Talk:Udea and Her Seven Brothers No edit summary current Tag: Manual revert
• 13:0313:03, 5 September 2025 diff hist +1,261 Talk:Udea and Her Seven Brothers →Description Length: new section Tags: Reverted New topic
• 13:0213:02, 5 September 2025 diff hist +1,280 Talk:Udea and Her Seven Brothers →Description Length: new section Tag: New topic

29 August 2025

• 19:4919:49, 29 August 2025 diff hist +273 Beth Shalom Temple (Havana) Cleaned up the promotional language and added several new book sources on the history of Judaism in Cuba. I found three different years for when the synagogue was built (1952, 1953, and 1957) so I just cited all three and wrote "1950s." Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

22 August 2025

• 15:0315:03, 22 August 2025 diff hist −311 m Frost Art Museum Article was flagged for being written like an advertisement; I cleaned up the language and removed some things which couldn't be verified. I also added a citation to their annual report to show what the museum has for exhibits, etc. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

2 August 2024

• 02:4902:49, 2 August 2024 diff hist +875 Talk:Nostrand Avenue No edit summary
• 02:4602:46, 2 August 2024 diff hist +72 Nostrand Avenue See talk page. Tag: Visual edit

1 August 2024

• 17:1117:11, 1 August 2024 diff hist +6 Talk:Nostrand Avenue No edit summary
• 17:1017:10, 1 August 2024 diff hist +4 Talk:Nostrand Avenue No edit summary
• 11:5411:54, 1 August 2024 diff hist +2 Talk:Nostrand Avenue No edit summary
• 11:5411:54, 1 August 2024 diff hist +1,755 Talk:Nostrand Avenue No edit summary

7 July 2024

• 00:2500:25, 7 July 2024 diff hist −13,415 Toyota Entune I chopped this one down a lot but I really felt it was justified; I didn't see the need to go into all that detail about an outdated service Toyota doesn't even use in its cars anymore; I felt that a short summary of what this was and what vehicles had it was sufficient. I actually owned a car that had this system but I didn't cite myself :) Tags: Reverted COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

30 June 2024

• 20:0020:00, 30 June 2024 diff hist −3,670 Ministry of Information and Communications Technology (Qatar) The article was written like election propaganda, lol; I cut down the section about the e-government and digital literacy programs. The article had a lot about “Cyber Security”, including the “National Strategies” related to cyber security, but based on my research, this is handled by a different Qatari agency, the NCSA. So I deleted all of that. I also added a couple panels with Qatar-related topics. Tags: COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

19 May 2024

• 19:3519:35, 19 May 2024 diff hist +232 m Teen Missions International The article was flagged for not meeting Wikipedia's notability guidelines, and for having possible original research. After reviewing the article, I feel the organization does meet the notability guidelines; it is mentioned in multiple external sources, including a book about AIDS relief in Africa. I also believe the information is not original research, but rather mostly from the organization's website. I may come back to clean up more of the language which sounds like an advertisement... Tag: Visual edit

6 February 2024

• 20:4520:45, 6 February 2024 diff hist −748 m Sortimo It was definitely written like an advertisement; I cleaned up a lot of the language. I also deleted the sentence stating that the facility manufactured van racks and shelving. Of course it did, (lol) that's what the company sells. I added some more source material on company histoyr as well. Tags: COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

19 January 2024

• 18:5218:52, 19 January 2024 diff hist +140 m Statistics of the COVID-19 pandemic in Italy Added more links and some rewriting to make it more encyclopedic. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links

15 January 2024

• 20:2720:27, 15 January 2024 diff hist −617 m Excimer laser-assisted nonocclusive anastomosis It was flagged for not having enough links to other Wikipedia articles. However, I also thought it could use a rewrite to make it more clear and encyclopedic. (compare prior version) I also added a new journal citation about how the technique is also used for cardiac surgery. Tags: Visual edit: Switched Newcomer task Newcomer task: links

10 January 2024

• 02:5902:59, 10 January 2024 diff hist +112 Canalicular adenoma The article was flagged for not having enough links to other Wikipedia articles and for being overly technical. I didn't think it was that lacking in links to other articles, but it was definitely written in a very technical style with a lot of professional jargon. I rewrote it with simpler and more understandable language. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 02:4002:40, 10 January 2024 diff hist +19 m Association for Nutrition It was flagged for not having links to other Wikipedia articles. I actually felt that it did have sufficient links to other Wikipedia articles, but I added a few more. And corrected a couple small things :) current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links

3 January 2024

• 16:4016:40, 3 January 2024 diff hist −76 WeMall It was written like an advertisement. I cleaned it up....so it wouldn't be written like an advertisement. Also, this platform's website says it's shut down until further notice; I indicated and cited that. I will watch this page and see if that pages. Tags: COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

1 January 2024

• 22:3022:30, 1 January 2024 diff hist +507 Talk:Pachmarhi No edit summary
• 22:2822:28, 1 January 2024 diff hist −610 m Pachmarhi cleaned up more of it but I'm not done... Tag: Visual edit

29 December 2023

• 00:2200:22, 29 December 2023 diff hist −100 m Pachmarhi Definitely needed the tone cleaned up to match encyclopedic style! I'm not done yet! Coming back to clean up "Tourism" to the end... Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

28 December 2023

• 16:2116:21, 28 December 2023 diff hist +58 m Canadian Forces College As the template message, it was written like an advertisement. I changed a couple introduction sentences and also rewrote the curriculum description so it read like an encyclopedia article instead of an advertisement for His Majesty's military. lol Tags: COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

21 December 2023

• 12:4312:43, 21 December 2023 diff hist −237 m Tamana (NGO) It was written like an advertisement. I rewrote it so it would read like an encyclopedia article. I may come back and rewrite it some more after reviewing Wikipedia's guidlines...lol... Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

17 December 2023

• 22:1522:15, 17 December 2023 diff hist +398 m Flyboys (film) It was flagged for not having an encyclopedic tone and indeed in parts it did not; I rewrote the film description so that it would read in a more encyclopedic manner. Yay for encyclopedic tone... Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

16 December 2023

• 13:5413:54, 16 December 2023 diff hist +844 Hong Kong Maritime Museum Cleaned up the English translation some more and removed some of the language that sounded like an advertisement. And added a journal citation! I know right? So excited when we can find support in an academic journal... Tag: Visual edit
• 04:2604:26, 16 December 2023 diff hist −1 Hong Kong Maritime Museum More cleaning up of the English translation... Tag: Visual edit
• 03:1003:10, 16 December 2023 diff hist +138 m Hong Kong Maritime Museum Cleaned up the "Initial Murray House Location" paragraph; I'm going to come back and clean up the rest. It just needed a better English translation...e.g. we don't really use "treble" to describe three times the amount in 2023, unless you're talking about a legal statute Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 02:4402:44, 16 December 2023 diff hist +8 m Hong Kong Maritime Museum I replaced "it also covers" with "its exhibits also cover." In English don't really say a museum "covers" a certain topic, that verb is more so used for books and other print media. More edits on here to come...(maybe...) Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

14 December 2023

• 01:0301:03, 14 December 2023 diff hist +48 m One Year Later Added a non primary source (the best one possible, in my opinion) Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 00:5900:59, 14 December 2023 diff hist +11 m One Year Later The article was full of past tense usage, e.g. "in Volume 6, Batman punched the Joker", which I replaced with the preferred historical present tense, e.g. "in Volume 6, Batman punches the Joker." Interestingly some of the descriptions did use historical present tense; it was inconsistent throughout the article. It's consistent now! Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 00:4000:40, 14 December 2023 diff hist −401 m Mian Chah Cleaned up the tone to make it more encyclopedic (is that a word?) but the lack of citations is still an issue. I didn't find this village in a single book, not on Google Books or Everafter or anywhere else I looked, so someone else can maybe tackle that challenge...maybe someone who speaks Farsi... Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

12 December 2023

• 01:2901:29, 12 December 2023 diff hist +34 Kheroth Bose No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 01:2801:28, 12 December 2023 diff hist −8 Kheroth Bose No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 01:2801:28, 12 December 2023 diff hist −109 m Kheroth Bose Cleaned up the introductory paragraph and moved some of its content to the main body of the article. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links

10 December 2023

• 22:2622:26, 10 December 2023 diff hist +161 Talk:Books of Mortals No edit summary
• 22:2422:24, 10 December 2023 diff hist −160 m Books of Mortals I cleaned this up a little but see my notes on the talk page... Tag: Visual edit
• 21:5321:53, 10 December 2023 diff hist −57 Embrace Innovations No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 21:5021:50, 10 December 2023 diff hist +33 Embrace Innovations No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 21:4821:48, 10 December 2023 diff hist −859 m Embrace Innovations Wow that was totally written like an advertisement, lol. Cleaned up the language. Tags: COI template removed references removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 19:1219:12, 10 December 2023 diff hist 0 Abdirahman Haji Mumin No edit summary Tags: Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 19:1119:11, 10 December 2023 diff hist −2 Abdirahman Haji Mumin No edit summary Tags: Manual revert Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 19:1119:11, 10 December 2023 diff hist +2 Abdirahman Haji Mumin No edit summary Tags: Reverted Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 19:1119:11, 10 December 2023 diff hist +2 Abdirahman Haji Mumin No edit summary Tags: Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 19:1019:10, 10 December 2023 diff hist +28 Abdirahman Haji Mumin No edit summary Tags: Visual edit: Switched Newcomer task Newcomer task: links