User contributions for Icecracker

1 April 2025

• 03:5703:57, 1 April 2025 diff hist +16 Beginner (band) →Band history: Added wikipedia citation about hiphop; Added comma where it is necessary current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:5503:55, 1 April 2025 diff hist +2 m Kishen Velani Broke a paragraph, for better date timeline current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:5403:54, 1 April 2025 diff hist +1 m Chris Blair (rugby league) →Playing career: Broke a long paragraph current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:5003:50, 1 April 2025 diff hist +2 Sheko and Mezenger People's Democratic Unity Organization →History: Added a comma and broke a long paragraph current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:4903:49, 1 April 2025 diff hist +4 Thomas Gillespie (minister) Added comma where it's necessary; Broke a long paragraph current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:4703:47, 1 April 2025 diff hist +5 m Bad Aibling →History: Added commas where it's necessary current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:4503:45, 1 April 2025 diff hist +4 Agonimia flabelliformis Fixed the formatting; Broken the long paragraph into four digestible paragraphs, for easier reading Tag: Visual edit
• 03:4403:44, 1 April 2025 diff hist +45 Loren Roberta Barton Added a comma; Added a wikipedia citation of the school current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:4303:43, 1 April 2025 diff hist −1 Kieran Maguire →Studies and other media appearances: Fixed the new line formatting (extra unnecessary line) Tag: Visual edit
• 03:4203:42, 1 April 2025 diff hist −3 Else Moltke →Early life, education and family: Added wikipedia citation on Ruds Vedby; Removed a redundant phrase; Added commas where necessary current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:4003:40, 1 April 2025 diff hist −1 m Dragoljub Velimirović →Theory: Remove double spaces; Added one comma Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3903:39, 1 April 2025 diff hist +1 m Lucía Beristaín Added one comma only current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3903:39, 1 April 2025 diff hist +6 m Don Marshall (actor) →Early life: Broke a long paragraph current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3503:35, 1 April 2025 diff hist −139 USS Keystone State (1853) →Philadelphia and Savannah Steam Navigation Company (1853–1861): Remove 148 of double spaces; Broken a lot of long paragraph; Added a lot of commas where it is necessary; Corrected some typo error Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3403:34, 1 April 2025 diff hist +16 Gossi →Incidents: Added a comma; Broke a long paragraph; Added wikipedia citation current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3403:34, 1 April 2025 diff hist −5 Drosophila mettleri →Distribution due to heat: Broken a few long paragraphs to a more digestible paragraph chunks current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3403:34, 1 April 2025 diff hist −36 m Glazing (window) →Double-paned windows: Broken a long paragraph into three shorter paragraphs current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3403:34, 1 April 2025 diff hist −8 Tinsley Marshalling Yard →Decline: Added commas where necessary; Removed double spaces current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3403:34, 1 April 2025 diff hist −4 Sean Terry Remove double spaces; Broke a long paragraph current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3403:34, 1 April 2025 diff hist +39 Shaolin Temple (1982 film) Added a wikipedia citation; Broken a long paragraph; Removed a double space current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3403:34, 1 April 2025 diff hist +5 Henri Laupmaa Joined 3 sentences together, so it becomes a paragraph, because it reads awkward. current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3403:34, 1 April 2025 diff hist +1 Sontha Vooru (1956 film) →Plot: Broke a long paragraph current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3403:34, 1 April 2025 diff hist +260 Tail wagging by dogs Added commas where it's necessary; Broken a long paragraph for better thought-flow; Added wikipedia citation Tag: Visual edit
• 03:2003:20, 1 April 2025 diff hist −11 m Lewiston Railroad Removed double spaces only current Tag: Visual edit

25 March 2025

• 19:5619:56, 25 March 2025 diff hist +3 m Earl of Donoughmore →History: Added a comma and broke one long paragraph current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:4719:47, 25 March 2025 diff hist +1 Wilhelmina Weber Furlong →Biography: Broken the paragraphs, by date and timelines of achievements; Removed double spaces current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:4519:45, 25 March 2025 diff hist −9 m Jonathan Garcia Broken the paragraphs, by date and timelines of his achievements current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:4119:41, 25 March 2025 diff hist +6 Barlow's wheel →How it works: Broken down a very long paragraph on how it works, as readers can better understand this to visualize the process and/or give clearer instruction. current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:4119:41, 25 March 2025 diff hist +3 m Seante Williams →Professional career: Broke a long paragraph only current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:4019:40, 25 March 2025 diff hist +3 Killer (Alice Cooper album) →Critical reception: Broken down the citations or reviews of different people/industry into 3, as this looks better and will not confused readers current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:3919:39, 25 March 2025 diff hist −1 m Thomas Morgan (MP died 1565) Fused two short sentences together current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:3919:39, 25 March 2025 diff hist −6 Tactics of the Iraqi insurgency →Improvised explosive devices (IEDs): Removed double spaces; Fused shorter sentences into one; Broken some long paragraphs current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:3919:39, 25 March 2025 diff hist +13 Star Fire →Development: Added citation for Exidy; Broken some long paragraphs; Added a comma where it's necessary current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:3919:39, 25 March 2025 diff hist +52 Manuel de la Sota →Professional career: Broken a few long paragraphs (for easier reading and proper thought-flow); Removed double spaces; Added commas; Added citations Tag: Visual edit
• 19:3919:39, 25 March 2025 diff hist +275 Butcher block Re-arranged stand-alone sentences, for better thought-flow; Improved some sentences; Removed double space current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:0519:05, 25 March 2025 diff hist +1 m Jan Švéda Added a comma current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:0519:05, 25 March 2025 diff hist +30 Blue Blink →Story: Broke a paragraph for better thought-flow; Added a Wikipedia page citation for Viki current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:0019:00, 25 March 2025 diff hist +4 m Ravi Kant (lawyer) Added only commas where it is necessary current Tag: Visual edit

16 November 2024

• 16:0816:08, 16 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Simon Clegg Remove double space; Added commas where necessary current Tag: Visual edit
• 15:4615:46, 16 November 2024 diff hist +2 m 1993 DieHard 500 Broke a long paragraph Tag: Visual edit
• 14:4114:41, 16 November 2024 diff hist +3 m Khadda Minguel →Career: Broke a couple of long paragraphs current Tag: Visual edit
• 11:4211:42, 16 November 2024 diff hist +71 2007 NRL season →Season summary: Corrected grammar and sentence structuring; Added "The year" on the sentence (as this is more appropriate); Added a comma current Tag: Visual edit
• 11:3911:39, 16 November 2024 diff hist +2 m Ralph Hosmer →Work: Broke a paragraph and added a comma current Tag: Visual edit
• 11:3811:38, 16 November 2024 diff hist +13 m Martins Beach →Legal conflict over access: Broken paragraphs where it's needed; Added commas as well current Tag: Visual edit
• 11:3611:36, 16 November 2024 diff hist +11 Comrades of the Great War Reformatted content, for better viewing (turned trustees into bullet point); Put some info in next line (as this is appropriate, compared to simple messed-up paragraph); Added comma where it's necessary; Removed double spaces Tag: Visual edit
• 11:3311:33, 16 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Hiroshi Iwata Broke a paragraph Tag: Visual edit
• 11:3211:32, 16 November 2024 diff hist +78 Spanish cuisine Removed double spaces; Added comma where necessary; Rewritten an awkward sentence and added a source, as requested. Tag: Visual edit
• 11:2411:24, 16 November 2024 diff hist +1 RoadPeace →History: Just added a comma where it's needed current Tag: Visual edit
• 11:2211:22, 16 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Thilivhali Mulaudzi Added comma where it's necessary Tag: Visual edit
• 11:2111:21, 16 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Church of the Exaltation of the Holy Cross, Tambov →History: Just added a comma where it's necessary current Tag: Visual edit