User contributions for Entirelybs

10 April 2018

• 22:4322:43, 10 April 2018 diff hist +91 List of Matrix series characters →Cypher/Mr. Reagan: clarified how Cypher killed Apoc and Switch by removing their Jacks, as opposed to having shot Tank and Dozer in the Nebuchadnezzar
• 22:3222:32, 10 April 2018 diff hist 0 m List of Matrix series characters →Tank: copy-edit, using parentheses instead of comma for readability / clarity
• 22:3022:30, 10 April 2018 diff hist +2 m List of Matrix series characters →Kid: new paragraph
• 22:2922:29, 10 April 2018 diff hist +67 List of Matrix series characters clarified orphan was one of the potentials Neo met, and linked to the section later in this same article.
• 22:2022:20, 10 April 2018 diff hist +1 m List of Matrix series characters →Sati: copy-edit, added a space
• 22:1922:19, 10 April 2018 diff hist +183 List of Matrix series characters →Roland: clarified this statement, cited source, re-organized sentence
• 22:0522:05, 10 April 2018 diff hist +71 m List of Matrix series characters →Merovingian: including comment in passage, not just in reference item
• 22:0322:03, 10 April 2018 diff hist +32 List of Matrix series characters →Merovingian: clarified why Persephone betrays the Merovingian
• 22:0122:01, 10 April 2018 diff hist +38 m List of Matrix series characters →Merovingian: link to La Vrai in matrix.wikia
• 21:4921:49, 10 April 2018 diff hist −4 m List of Matrix series characters →Link: copy-edit
• 21:4721:47, 10 April 2018 diff hist +117 List of Matrix series characters →Kid: bent spoon reference

16 September 2016

• 23:2223:22, 16 September 2016 diff hist +9 m Marin Islands copy edit - relocate prior history to proper section
• 23:1723:17, 16 September 2016 diff hist −3 m Yerba Buena Island →Other points of interest: copy edit
• 22:1622:16, 16 September 2016 diff hist +11 m Farallon Island Light →History: adding link to Southeast Farallon Island
• 22:0722:07, 16 September 2016 diff hist −27 m Farallon Islands →History: copy edit - split long sentence into 3.
• 22:0322:03, 16 September 2016 diff hist −9 m Farallon Islands →History: copy edit
• 00:0800:08, 16 September 2016 diff hist +309 High Island (Bronx) added information about 2 owners, cited source

15 September 2016

• 23:4623:46, 15 September 2016 diff hist 0 m Rat Island (Bronx) →History: typo - last name spelled two different ways. confirmed correct spelling by reviewing referenced articles
• 23:3723:37, 15 September 2016 diff hist −37 m Rikers Island →Conversion to jail: copy edit - too many dashes makes a really long, awkward sentence. broke into 3 sentences.

28 December 2015

• 18:3818:38, 28 December 2015 diff hist −23 m George Washington too many commas - copy edit to remove extra commas
• 18:2618:26, 28 December 2015 diff hist −1 m George Washington →Early life (1732–1753): copy edit, remove comma

21 December 2015

• 19:0519:05, 21 December 2015 diff hist +5 m Cahuenga Pass copy edit - long sentence, split into two
• 18:5418:54, 21 December 2015 diff hist +3 m James Boon Lankershim →Biography: copy edit
• 18:4518:45, 21 December 2015 diff hist 0 m Isaac Newton Van Nuys →Career: copy edit - could not have been 30 since DOB listed as Nov 1836.
• 18:3118:31, 21 December 2015 diff hist 0 m Isaac Lankershim →Biography: copy edit
• 18:2218:22, 21 December 2015 diff hist 0 m History of the San Fernando Valley →Development in the new century: copy edit, punctuation mostly
• 18:2018:20, 21 December 2015 diff hist −1 m History of the San Fernando Valley →Development in the new century: copy edit
• 18:2018:20, 21 December 2015 diff hist −1 m History of the San Fernando Valley →The 20th century: copy edit - punctuation
• 18:0818:08, 21 December 2015 diff hist 0 m History of the San Fernando Valley →Stage stops and the overland mail: copy edit / typo
• 18:0418:04, 21 December 2015 diff hist −1 m History of the San Fernando Valley →Ranchos: copy edit

20 November 2015

• 20:1520:15, 20 November 2015 diff hist −13 m Silver Strand Training Complex →Army: re-wrote to remove double use of "battery" - reads awkwardly
• 20:1320:13, 20 November 2015 diff hist +253 Silver Strand Training Complex antenna removed (even documented later in same article) - so moved reference up and replaced "is" with "was" in a couple of places
• 19:5819:58, 20 November 2015 diff hist +4 m Naval Amphibious Base Coronado No edit summary
• 19:5219:52, 20 November 2015 diff hist +4 m Naval Amphibious Base Coronado →History
• 19:5019:50, 20 November 2015 diff hist −2 m Silver Strand (San Diego) →Beach: re-wrote for sentence structure/grammar
• 19:4919:49, 20 November 2015 diff hist −15 m Silver Strand (San Diego) →Beach: re-wrote for sentence structure/grammar
• 19:4719:47, 20 November 2015 diff hist −12 m Silver Strand (San Diego) No edit summary
• 19:2519:25, 20 November 2015 diff hist −36 m California State Route 75 removed unsupported adjective about Orange Ave being a great place. Irrelevant to article

24 August 2015

• 22:1922:19, 24 August 2015 diff hist +1 m History of books →List of notable modern innovations: renamed section. a list of "first book printed in x-language/country" is not a list of innovations.

21 August 2015

• 23:1023:10, 21 August 2015 diff hist −10 m San Francisco Giants →1989: Will the "Thrill", World Series and the earthquake: sentence structure and grammar
• 23:0723:07, 21 August 2015 diff hist −21 m San Francisco Giants →1989: Will the "Thrill", World Series and the earthquake: rm reference to clutch home runs - need to cite sources, otherwise used as WP:Peacock
• 23:0623:06, 21 August 2015 diff hist −52 San Francisco Giants →1985–89: Nadir and resurrection: removed outcome of 1987 WS, as Giants weren't in it - this is an article about SF Giants - AND there is a wikilinks to the 87 WS in that section.
• 23:0323:03, 21 August 2015 diff hist −26 m San Francisco Giants →1963–84: Always a bridesmaid, never the bride: rewrote to eliminate awkward wikilink aliased simply as "they"
• 22:5122:51, 21 August 2015 diff hist +10 San Francisco Giants →Early days and the John McGraw era: clarification on pre-modern-era World Series (MLB considers 1903 the first World Series, and they are a good authority).
• 22:4722:47, 21 August 2015 diff hist +47 1890 World Series clarification - proper wikilink. this was a pre-modern-era World Series
• 22:4622:46, 21 August 2015 diff hist +51 1889 World Series clarification - proper wikilink. this was a pre-modern-era World Series
• 22:4522:45, 21 August 2015 diff hist +47 1888 World Series clarification - proper wikilink. this was a pre-modern-era World Series
• 22:4422:44, 21 August 2015 diff hist +54 1886 World Series →Background: clarification - proper wikilink. this was a pre-modern-era World Series
• 22:4222:42, 21 August 2015 diff hist +119 1884 World Series clarification on World Series - MLB itself starts in 1903, and they are a pretty good authority on this.
• 22:2922:29, 21 August 2015 diff hist +1 m San Francisco Giants parentheses