User contributions for Djpmccann

31 October 2025

• 13:5413:54, 31 October 2025 diff hist +542 List of amendments to the Constitution of the United States Changes to more precisely note the process laid out in Article 5. Previous wording in opening para was ambiguous as to 'together': implied adoption and ratification occurred together for the bill of rights (they were obviously not simultaneous legal events). Other changes, to grammar and spacing primarily, in that and later sections. current Tag: Visual edit

28 October 2025

• 21:3721:37, 28 October 2025 diff hist +1,059 Controversies about Opus Dei Changes throughout especially to mortification, allegations sections to bring these in line with sources and more clearly explain both the critiques and the responses. Tag: Visual edit
• 21:3621:36, 28 October 2025 diff hist +472 Mortification in Catholic theology Changes throughout to correct quite harmful and incomplete descriptions and allusions to certain practices and illnesses. Insensitive treatment of mental illness in this article remains a problem and other editors should continue to do more work: to bring this article up to date (espeically re modern church teaching), less morbid-spectator, less risk, less problematic, and less triggering for those suffering from various illnesses. current Tag: Visual edit
• 11:3311:33, 28 October 2025 diff hist +81 Charles Longley Changes to improve and expand this too-short article, especially in the first paragraph. current Tag: Visual edit
• 11:0711:07, 28 October 2025 diff hist +676 Anglican Communion Changes to multiple sections to correct errors and clarify meanings and improve readability. Increased explanation of some points for clarity and to insert concurrently and widely held views as to, eg, the effects of the decisions at Lambeth. Tag: Visual edit
• 11:0511:05, 28 October 2025 diff hist +84 John Colenso Small changes, mostly for grammar and readability, throughout. current Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
• 09:2609:26, 28 October 2025 diff hist +34 Act of Supremacy 1558 Edits throughout to correct taxonomy and naming conventions and standard style for wikipedia. current Tag: Visual edit
• 08:4308:43, 28 October 2025 diff hist +2 Alexandra of Denmark Small edits. Tag: Visual edit
• 08:4008:40, 28 October 2025 diff hist −2 Najeeb Halaby Several minor changes to correct to better referencing of maiden names of wives mentioned; other small edits. current Tag: Visual edit
• 08:2308:23, 28 October 2025 diff hist +1 m Wikipedia:Deletion guidelines for administrators →On deleting pages: Small edit to correct for a lonesome comma; this change also helps understanding of this rather long and clumsy sentence otherwise. current
• 08:2008:20, 28 October 2025 diff hist +44 Wikipedia:Deletion guidelines for administrators →Rough consensus: change to connect this sentence with the prior, example sentence, and better explain the sequence of events and consideration of the argument. On any view, an argument that has been validly made, but then its factual substratum or premise (here, 'no references exist') has been changed deliberately to preclude the argument, is still relevant. Not persuasive any more, but the fact of it having been made is still entirely relevant. The change, indeed, proves the argument.

25 October 2025

• 10:0410:04, 25 October 2025 diff hist +4 Encyclopædia Britannica →Edition summary: added wikilink to editor's article. Tag: Visual edit
• 09:5709:57, 25 October 2025 diff hist +1,562 Encyclopædia Britannica Changes throughout, particular changes to the last part of the introductory header section to incorporate a more neutral and accurate portrayal of the quality of the encyclopaedia, mostly extracting material in lower parts of the article and summarising. Wikipedia must be especially conscious of its duty to be neutral and fair and gracious, here, to its arguably main competitor. Changes throughout to expression, grammar, citations, spacing, headings, for consistency, correctness, readability. Tag: Visual edit
• 07:4407:44, 25 October 2025 diff hist +3 James Lu Small edit for grammar. current Tag: Visual edit
• 07:4007:40, 25 October 2025 diff hist +105 Raymond Zage Small change to grammar and to clarify meaning and readability. current Tag: Visual edit
• 07:4007:40, 25 October 2025 diff hist +26 Zhou Yahui Changes throughout to improve grammar, consistency, readability and compliance with standard wikipedia format articles of this type. current Tag: Visual edit
• 07:2107:21, 25 October 2025 diff hist −8 Blendr Small edits throughout current Tag: Visual edit
• 07:1207:12, 25 October 2025 diff hist +110 Joel Simkhai Small edits to improve english and make content consistent across article. current Tag: Visual edit
• 06:2106:21, 25 October 2025 diff hist −267 Henry Beaufort No edit summary Tag: Manual revert
• 06:2106:21, 25 October 2025 diff hist +267 Henry Beaufort Changes and improvements throughout. The two paras about Joan of Arc could be moved to their own section, methinks. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 01:1601:16, 25 October 2025 diff hist +467 Commodity pool operator Changes throughout to correct and improve english expression and clarify statements and for consistency intra-article and with wikipedia standards; small changes to prepositions and corrections of punctuation throughout. current Tag: Visual edit
• 01:1301:13, 25 October 2025 diff hist +22 National Futures Association Changes throughout to correct and improve english expression and clarify statements and for consistency intra-article and with wikipedia standards; small changes to prepositions and corrections of punctuation throughout. current Tag: Visual edit

23 October 2025

• 03:0503:05, 23 October 2025 diff hist +128 Fall of the Western Roman Empire Small changes throughout. current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:0503:05, 23 October 2025 diff hist +18 Constantius II →Early life: A note to mention his age at caesar-ing, and fix some small grammatical/punctuation errors. current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:0003:00, 23 October 2025 diff hist +70 Eunuch →Ancient Greece, Rome, and Byzantium: Changes and clarifications throughout to improve readability and clarify meaning, especially in the first paragraphs. Tag: Visual edit
• 02:5102:51, 23 October 2025 diff hist +70 Giovanni Battista Velluti Small changes to spacing and text for clarity and consistency with standard formatting current Tag: Visual edit

22 October 2025

• 22:5822:58, 22 October 2025 diff hist +723 Polity Changes to better explain this (tricky) subject throughout. I am a comparative constitutional lawyer so thought some of these changes important to make. Also associated changes to grammar, spacing, punctuation for readability and clarity throughout. Tags: Visual edit Disambiguation links added
• 22:3522:35, 22 October 2025 diff hist +1,623 Investiture Significant changes throughout to this article. Tried to improve structuring to make clear the variety of ways in which investiture can be used by different orgs. Improvements to expression, grammar and removal of errors and misformatting throughout. current Tag: Visual edit
• 22:3422:34, 22 October 2025 diff hist +107 Shakespeare's will Small changes throughout for consistency, clarity and to improve grammar and consolidate similar sentences. current Tag: Visual edit
• 22:0922:09, 22 October 2025 diff hist +101 Palaeography Small changes to clarify meaning and improve expression in opening paragraphs. current Tag: Visual edit
• 21:3721:37, 22 October 2025 diff hist −235 French Polynesia Changes throughout especially to government sections to consolidate text, remove repetition, fix errors, fix grammatical inconsistency, improve readability and increase size of otherwise unreadable maps. Tag: Visual edit
• 21:3021:30, 22 October 2025 diff hist +105 Richard Didier Updates and edits/corrections current Tag: Visual edit
• 21:2421:24, 22 October 2025 diff hist +77 List of colonial and departmental heads of French Polynesia Changes to correct grammar, readability and english expression throughout. current Tag: Visual edit
• 20:0220:02, 22 October 2025 diff hist +110 Anderson Island (Tasmania) smallish edits throughout for clarity, readability, coherence, consistency across similar pages. current Tag: Visual edit
• 18:0518:05, 22 October 2025 diff hist +8 Confraternity of the Immaculate Conception Changes throughout to fix grammar and remove repetitions and errors. current Tag: Visual edit
• 17:2817:28, 22 October 2025 diff hist +1 m A∴A∴ Grammar fix. current Tags: Manual revert Visual edit
• 16:2616:26, 22 October 2025 diff hist −40 HP Envy Small edits Tag: Visual edit

21 October 2025

• 03:5203:52, 21 October 2025 diff hist +44 Italian Renaissance Changes primarily to introductory paragraphs to better contextualise and convey the Italian nature of the article (given its title) and clarify formerly ambiguous statements about timing and components of the era. current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:5003:50, 21 October 2025 diff hist +484 Post-classical history Small changes for clarity and flow and consistency. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
• 03:4903:49, 21 October 2025 diff hist +5 Flavio Biondo Small changes. current Tag: Visual edit
• 03:4903:49, 21 October 2025 diff hist +21 Pope Eugene IV →Recovery: change to title to better convey content of the section. Tag: Visual edit
• 03:4403:44, 21 October 2025 diff hist +321 Pope Eugene IV Improvements to quality and coverage of introductory paragraphs (presented a quite misleading note about the Dudum Bull). Other small changes throughout. This article needs further work. Tag: Visual edit
• 03:0703:07, 21 October 2025 diff hist +111 Conciliarism Small (mostly) edits for clarity and to fix grammatical/punctuation errors. current Tag: Visual edit
• 02:3802:38, 21 October 2025 diff hist +180 Jewish ghettos in Europe Small edits for clarity and to fix grammatical/punctuation errors. Added detail to certain sentences to differentiate the various periods being discussed. Tag: Visual edit
• 02:3702:37, 21 October 2025 diff hist +202 Early modern period Small edits for clarity and to fix grammatical/punctuation errors. Added ambiguity tag. This whole article is in need of some critical review. Tag: Visual edit
• 02:3402:34, 21 October 2025 diff hist +12 Nanban trade →European accounts of Japan: Small edits to fix grammatical/capitalisation errors. current Tag: Visual edit
• 02:3002:30, 21 October 2025 diff hist +44 Nanban trade →European accounts of Japan: Small edits for clarity and to fix grammatical/punctuation errors. Tag: Visual edit
• 02:2902:29, 21 October 2025 diff hist +113 Help:Citation Style 1 →Work and publisher: Small edits for clarity and to fix grammatical/punctuation errors. Changed a couple of the examples used to make the point a little clearer. Tag: Visual edit
• 02:2902:29, 21 October 2025 diff hist +76 The Mercury News Small edits for clarity and to fix grammatical/punctuation errors. current Tag: Visual edit
• 02:2902:29, 21 October 2025 diff hist +30 New Almaden Small edits for clarity and to fix grammatical/punctuation errors. current Tag: Visual edit