User contributions for Divestedassets

15 February 2024

• 19:2819:28, 15 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Ken Russell →Writings: Removed an unnecessary hyphen, "science fiction" wasn't being used as an adjective.

28 November 2023

• 17:3117:31, 28 November 2023 diff hist +25 m Dover, New Jersey →2000 census: Rephrased to establish a more formal tone, including removing a phrasal verb

23 November 2023

• 04:3104:31, 23 November 2023 diff hist +2 m Darcy Clay →Music: Added needed quotation marks to song title.

22 October 2023

• 13:1513:15, 22 October 2023 diff hist +1 m Sunni Islam Added a missing period to "Books of God" section, first paragraph.

17 August 2023

• 04:5604:56, 17 August 2023 diff hist +9 m Bullitt Added a heading for the subsection "Plot," which was missing.

15 August 2023

• 22:5322:53, 15 August 2023 diff hist +1 m Caryl Chessman added missing comma

10 July 2023

• 01:5701:57, 10 July 2023 diff hist +1 m Alien 3 added missing comma

25 April 2022

• 17:5417:54, 25 April 2022 diff hist +13 m Genius + Love = Yo La Tengo →Disc 2: Add cover source to track list to match rest of entry. Tag: Visual edit

24 April 2022

• 17:1017:10, 24 April 2022 diff hist −8 m Donnie Brasco (film) added needed punctuation and slightly reworded to better match the meaning of the source used. Tag: Visual edit

23 April 2022

• 13:3213:32, 23 April 2022 diff hist +1 m The Rip Chords added needed apostrophe Tag: Visual edit
• 13:3213:32, 23 April 2022 diff hist +1 m The Rip Chords add needed apostrophe Tag: Visual edit

15 April 2022

• 14:0114:01, 15 April 2022 diff hist +2 Rack City Commas around non-restrictive added elements. Tag: Visual edit
• 13:5913:59, 15 April 2022 diff hist −7 m Rack City Removed unnecessary punctuation. Tag: Visual edit

26 March 2022

• 15:4415:44, 26 March 2022 diff hist +1 m Tales of Terror (band) Changed less to fewer (albums is a count noun). Tag: Visual edit

10 December 2021

• 01:3501:35, 10 December 2021 diff hist +4 m Robbie Shakespeare Italicized the name of an album Tag: Visual edit

28 November 2021

• 16:2516:25, 28 November 2021 diff hist 0 m Angel (1937 film) Capitalized the word Angel, it's being used as the name of a character. Tag: Visual edit

8 September 2021

• 23:3923:39, 8 September 2021 diff hist −108 Kaleidoscope (British band) Rewrote multiple sentences to improve style and clarity -- moved phrases to group related details together, reduced wordiness and redundancies, and replaced informal or awkward verbs. Tag: Visual edit

12 September 2020

• 18:4818:48, 12 September 2020 diff hist 0 m Santa Sangre →Reception: de-capitalized a quotation
• 18:4718:47, 12 September 2020 diff hist −28 m Santa Sangre →Release: remove a redundant phrase
• 18:4518:45, 12 September 2020 diff hist −19 Santa Sangre →Development: Section rewritten through to omit needless words and improve English grammar. Towards the end of section, there are two sentences whose writing style still doesn't suit that of an encyclopedia, but I have left them, as revising them would probably entail revisiting the source, which I have not done.

18 April 2020

• 15:5715:57, 18 April 2020 diff hist +1 m Guillermo del Toro's unrealized projects Fixing broken link, spelling correction

16 November 2019

• 17:2017:20, 16 November 2019 diff hist +5 m Brian Eno Inserted comma and italicized album title.

1 September 2019

• 16:5116:51, 1 September 2019 diff hist −1 m Night of the Living Dead →Remakes and other related films: fixed spelling of character name
• 16:5016:50, 1 September 2019 diff hist −2 m Night of the Living Dead →Race and Gender: Fixed spelling of character name.

28 April 2019

• 13:2413:24, 28 April 2019 diff hist +1 m The Blackcoat's Daughter Spelling fix. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:2113:21, 28 April 2019 diff hist +1 m The Blackcoat's Daughter Added missing punctuation. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 February 2019

• 03:0803:08, 15 February 2019 diff hist +1 m The Night Eats the World No edit summary
• 03:0603:06, 15 February 2019 diff hist 0 m The Night Eats the World No edit summary

20 January 2019

• 14:1414:14, 20 January 2019 diff hist −1 m Jack Nitzsche No edit summary
• 14:1114:11, 20 January 2019 diff hist −1 m Jack Nitzsche No edit summary

12 January 2019

• 23:4723:47, 12 January 2019 diff hist +1 m Kae Tempest →Reception: fix typo in New York Times quote

8 December 2018

• 19:5119:51, 8 December 2018 diff hist +24 m Lyor Cohen →Personal life: rewrote to clarify (original is ambiguous as to whether son and daughter or son was responsible for life saving)
• 19:4919:49, 8 December 2018 diff hist −1 m Lyor Cohen →Personal life: whom to who
• 19:4819:48, 8 December 2018 diff hist −13 m Lyor Cohen →Personal life
• 19:4719:47, 8 December 2018 diff hist +8 m Lyor Cohen →Personal life: grammar
• 19:3419:34, 8 December 2018 diff hist +7 m Todd Moscowitz →Career
• 19:3319:33, 8 December 2018 diff hist −2 m Todd Moscowitz →Career
• 19:3319:33, 8 December 2018 diff hist +4 m Todd Moscowitz →Career
• 19:3219:32, 8 December 2018 diff hist +101 Todd Moscowitz →Career: Rewritten to improve clarity
• 19:1919:19, 8 December 2018 diff hist −17 03 Greedo →Career
• 19:1619:16, 8 December 2018 diff hist −5 m 03 Greedo →Career
• 19:1519:15, 8 December 2018 diff hist 0 m 03 Greedo →Early life
• 19:1419:14, 8 December 2018 diff hist +1 m 03 Greedo →Early life
• 19:1219:12, 8 December 2018 diff hist −78 m 03 Greedo →Early life: removed language that stated that Jackson lived in Gardena, CA throughout his childhood. According to Noisey citation in article, Jackson spent his childhood in numerous places, including St. Louis and Kansas.
• 19:0519:05, 8 December 2018 diff hist +35 m 03 Greedo No edit summary
• 19:0319:03, 8 December 2018 diff hist −9 m 03 Greedo →Personal life: series of minor edits, mostly for grammar. According to the source cited here, the police officer found drugs in the car. The original source casts doubt on the officer smelling marijuana, but not the finding of the methamphetamine.
• 18:5418:54, 8 December 2018 diff hist −40 m 03 Greedo →Career: grammar and usage fixes
• 16:3316:33, 8 December 2018 diff hist +2 m 03 Greedo →Career: changed 2 to two
• 16:3216:32, 8 December 2018 diff hist −11 m 03 Greedo →Early life: fixed wording
• 16:2116:21, 8 December 2018 diff hist −32 m 03 Greedo →Early life: removed wording that was both idiomatic and expressing something not provable.