User contributions for Dervorguilla

15 July 2025

• 05:3705:37, 15 July 2025 diff hist +8 MIT Crime Club →Activities: 'security' -> 'security workers' (may be clearer)
• 05:2805:28, 15 July 2025 diff hist +15 MIT Crime Club →Activities: '...the campus patrol officers' union discussed upcoming negotiations' -> '...the campus police union argued against cutting security to solve a budget crisis' (summarizing & rephrasing source without changing its meaning or implication, see WP:STICKTOSOURCE
• 04:3504:35, 15 July 2025 diff hist −45 MIT Crime Club →Activities: →References: fix ref 'tsai'; expand ref quote

14 July 2025

• 22:0122:01, 14 July 2025 diff hist −29 m MIT Crime Club →top: →Infobox: →location: 'Cambridge, Massachusetts' -> 'Cambridge, Massachusetts', per MOS:OVERLINK
• 21:4221:42, 14 July 2025 diff hist +1 MIT Crime Club →top: 'It also contributed...' -> 'It later contributed...'
• 21:3921:39, 14 July 2025 diff hist +21 m MIT Crime Club →top: add ref 'fargen' per WP:INTEGRITY
• 21:3021:30, 14 July 2025 diff hist +2 m MIT Crime Club →top: 'the murder' -> 'the incident', more precise (final charges also included armed robbery and firearm possession)

12 July 2025

• 21:5821:58, 12 July 2025 diff hist +7 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: '...the patrol officers' union...' -> '...the campus patrol officers' union...', per MOS:SPECIFICLINK
• 04:0704:07, 12 July 2025 diff hist +6 m File:MIT Crime Club Logo low-res.png →Summary: →description: '...a mashup of comic-strip detective Dick Tracy and MIT's beaver mascot' -> '...referencing comic-strip detective Dick Tracy and MIT mascot Tim the Beaver' current
• 03:3503:35, 12 July 2025 diff hist −14 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: →References: trim long ref quote
• 03:2903:29, 12 July 2025 diff hist +6 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: →References: fix ref quote
• 02:5302:53, 12 July 2025 diff hist +8 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: 'MIT's newspaper' -> 'MIT's student newspaper'
• 02:4902:49, 12 July 2025 diff hist 0 m MIT Crime Club →Influence: 'the Tech' -> 'The Tech'
• 02:4302:43, 12 July 2025 diff hist +15 m MIT Crime Club →Influence: 'A Massachusetts District Court judge...' -> 'A district court judge...' (more concise)
• 02:3402:34, 12 July 2025 diff hist −1 m MIT Crime Club →Influence: rm paragraph break, see MOS:PARA (about each paragraph dealing with a particular point)
• 02:2402:24, 12 July 2025 diff hist +13 MIT Crime Club →top: 'the murder of a drug dealer in a Harvard residence hall' -> 'the shooting of a local marijuana dealer at a Harvard residence hall'
• 02:0102:01, 12 July 2025 diff hist +86 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: →References: add ref quote
• 01:4701:47, 12 July 2025 diff hist +131 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: →References: add ref quote
• 01:3201:32, 12 July 2025 diff hist +61 MIT Crime Club →Activities: 'In September 2011 the Cambridge City Council adopted a resolution thanking the members for sponsoring bicycle theft-prevention workshops and so forth.' -> 'In 2011 Cambridge City Council adopted a resolution thanking the group for making MIT's campus a "safer and more welcoming environment for students" by sponsoring bicycle theft-prevention workshops and the like.' (per source)
• 00:3200:32, 12 July 2025 diff hist +6 MIT Crime Club →top: →Infobox: 'Logo, a mashup of ...' -> 'Logo, referencing ...'; +'Tim'
• 00:1400:14, 12 July 2025 diff hist −172 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: →References: cl ref 'beast' (update url and archive-url)

11 July 2025

• 23:3923:39, 11 July 2025 diff hist +509 MIT Crime Club →Activities: +ref (Rafat & Sutton, 2006)
• 23:0323:03, 11 July 2025 diff hist −14 m MIT Crime Club →History: '...MIT's news office said MIT did not know of any crime club there.' -> '...MIT said it did not know of any school crime club.' (per source)
• 21:1321:13, 11 July 2025 diff hist −18 MIT Crime Club →top: 'The club later contributed to a Snapped: Killer Couples television episode...' -> 'It also contributed to a Snapped: Killer Couples episode...' (more concise)
• 20:5220:52, 11 July 2025 diff hist −120 MIT Crime Club →top: rm 'The detectives were arrested and prosecuted; the case was dismissed before trial.' See MOS:INTRO. The prosecution & disposition of their case may relate to the club's reason for notability indirectly, but not *directly*. These specific details fit better in the article body.

10 July 2025

• 08:4708:47, 10 July 2025 diff hist −7 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: '... the group sponsored' -> '... it sponsored'
• 08:4408:44, 10 July 2025 diff hist −18 m MIT Crime Club →History: 'a staff writer at Boston magazine reported ...' -> 'Boston magazine reported ...'
• 08:3608:36, 10 July 2025 diff hist −6 MIT Crime Club →Activities: gm: '... and was rebroadcasting' -> '... and rebroadcasted' (do not restore 'rebroadcast', see https://www.dictionary.com/browse/rebroadcast)
• 08:2308:23, 10 July 2025 diff hist +3 MIT Crime Club →History: 'Harvard students also joined the group' -> 'Some Harvard students also became members'
• 08:1308:13, 10 July 2025 diff hist 0 m MIT Crime Club →Influence: fix ref Yu (ref quote punc)
• 08:0708:07, 10 July 2025 diff hist −7 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: fix ref 'Tsai', update url status
• 07:2607:26, 10 July 2025 diff hist −1 m List of attacks related to post-secondary schools →2000–2009: fix 'Harvard2009' section link anchor per Help:Tables and locations
• 06:4706:47, 10 July 2025 diff hist −14 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: fix ref 'Sparky', update url status
• 06:3606:36, 10 July 2025 diff hist −22 MIT Crime Club →Activities: fix ref Rafat, update url status
• 06:1806:18, 10 July 2025 diff hist −15 m MIT Crime Club →top: →Infobox: →Purpose: fix url status
• 05:5905:59, 10 July 2025 diff hist +153 m MIT Crime Club →Activities: fix ref 'beast', add archive url
• 05:2505:25, 10 July 2025 diff hist −25 m User:Dervorguilla rm unneeded User page template current
• 05:1505:15, 10 July 2025 diff hist +1 m User:Dervorguilla 'Ward Committee member, D-Cambridgeport and MIT' -> 'Democratic Party committeeman, Cambridge Ward 5'
• 04:5904:59, 10 July 2025 diff hist +53 m User talk:Dervorguilla →Trump task force: hide standard message current
• 04:5604:56, 10 July 2025 diff hist +52 m User talk:Dervorguilla →ArbCom 2023 Elections voter message: hide voter message

8 September 2024

• 02:1602:16, 8 September 2024 diff hist +90 m MIT Crime Club →top: →Infobox: →website: repair dead link using Wayback Machine; 'mitcrimeclub.org' -> 'mitcrimeclub.org (archived)'
• 01:1501:15, 8 September 2024 diff hist −45 m MIT Crime Club →Influence: 'university police' -> 'campus police' per MOS:OL (everyday words)
• 01:0701:07, 8 September 2024 diff hist +142 m MIT Crime Club →Influence: fix ref 'Convey': add archive url

7 September 2024

• 23:5123:51, 7 September 2024 diff hist +2 m User:Dervorguilla Copyedit (minor)

30 November 2023

• 00:5100:51, 30 November 2023 diff hist +7 m MIT Crime Club 'crimes in the MIT area' → 'campus and neighborhood crime', per Club Const. art. I ('Purpose')
• 00:2800:28, 30 November 2023 diff hist −4 m MIT Crime Club →History: 'five MIT students' → 'five students' (per source)
• 00:2500:25, 30 November 2023 diff hist −8 m MIT Crime Club →History: 'any crime club at the school' → 'any crime club there' (more concise)
• 00:1400:14, 30 November 2023 diff hist +52 m User talk:Dervorguilla →ArbCom 2022 Elections voter message: hide message

23 August 2023

• 06:3106:31, 23 August 2023 diff hist +411 Talk:Hunter Biden →Conflict of interest tag?: Reply Tag: Reply
• 05:3205:32, 23 August 2023 diff hist −1 m Talk:Hunter Biden →top: →Press: punc