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A user with 5 edits. Account created on 5 April 2017.
7 April 2017
- 19:3419:34, 7 April 2017 diff hist −40 m Task state segment →Inner-level stack pointers: Short sentences were combined, and long sentences were broken into smaller ones to improve reading flow
- 19:2719:27, 7 April 2017 diff hist +2 m Immersive sim Split first sentence in second paragraph into three sentences to avoid sentence sprawl.
- 04:5704:57, 7 April 2017 diff hist −147 The Wizard of Oz (1993 video game) →Gameplay and premise: Rewrote the first paragraph in a more concise manner. Removed irrelevant information. Tag: Visual edit
6 April 2017
- 23:2223:22, 6 April 2017 diff hist −17 m Human–computer interaction →Introduction: Made introduction sentence more concise Tag: Visual edit
5 April 2017
- 22:5422:54, 5 April 2017 diff hist −1 Curtsy (company) →History: Split first sentence into two. It was too long, causes difficulty to read.
