User contributions for 38.101.169.130

30 November 2015

• 17:5817:58, 30 November 2015 diff hist +2 Weehawken, New Jersey →References: Two columns

21 October 2015

• 17:5117:51, 21 October 2015 diff hist +8 Libertarian Party (United States) →Best results in major races: fact tag
• 17:5017:50, 21 October 2015 diff hist −96 American Drug War: The Last White Hope Sites with user-generated content, including imdb, are not considered reliable per WP:USERG.
• 17:4717:47, 21 October 2015 diff hist −8 Prohibition Party 1. Spaces do not go in front of citations.

17 August 2015

• 15:4415:44, 17 August 2015 diff hist −32 Franklin Storm Two good-sized paragraphs do not merit either their own subheading, nor bullets. Subheadings are to divide sections too large to stand on their own, and bullets are for short-item lists.

26 June 2015

• 17:4317:43, 26 June 2015 diff hist −6 Jupiter's Legacy (comic) →Characters: redundant boldface
• 17:4317:43, 26 June 2015 diff hist +4 Jupiter's Legacy (comic) →Jupiter's Circle: ce
• 17:4217:42, 26 June 2015 diff hist +2,358 Jupiter's Legacy (comic) Added material from Issue 3; updated CB Roundup scores.

25 June 2015

• 19:0419:04, 25 June 2015 diff hist +10 Wizarding World Digital →House points and House Cup: It's the word "and". Not an ampersand. See WP:&.

22 June 2015

• 15:3015:30, 22 June 2015 diff hist −1 Template:NJ Hudson County commissioners remove unneeded bracket

18 June 2015

• 16:3816:38, 18 June 2015 diff hist −13 Seth Gecko →Video games: WP:OVERLINK; ce
• 16:3616:36, 18 June 2015 diff hist −1 Seth Gecko →Film series universe: Proper punctuation; WP:TONE; slang terms and contractions are not part of the formal tone of an encyclopedia; names of places/businesses are not quoted; ce

17 June 2015

• 14:5014:50, 17 June 2015 diff hist −14 Tinder (app) Wikipedia is not a newspaper or a periodical. Its information is written with timeless wording, not dated wording, so terms like "recently" are meaningless.

11 June 2015

• 19:1619:16, 11 June 2015 diff hist +344 World of A Song of Ice and Fire →Braavos: We do not include material based on what Wikipedia editors think is "apparent". We include it on the basis of reliable secondary sources cited in the article.
• 19:1019:10, 11 June 2015 diff hist +6 World of A Song of Ice and Fire →Braavos: ce
• 19:0419:04, 11 June 2015 diff hist −80 Themes in A Song of Ice and Fire Summarize/streamline
• 19:0319:03, 11 June 2015 diff hist +49 Themes in A Song of Ice and Fire "Have started" is dated wording. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a periodical; the WSJ story does not mention the titles of the two cookbooks, so we cannot cite Amazon as a source for one of them; WP:PSTS; etc.
• 17:3117:31, 11 June 2015 diff hist +1,024 List of Saga story arcs →Volume Five: added material from issues 28 & 29.
• 16:3716:37, 11 June 2015 diff hist +197 List of A Song of Ice and Fire characters →Sandor Clegane: Add detail of the adaptation.
• 14:4714:47, 11 June 2015 diff hist +39 The Rains of Castamere →At the Twins: ce
• 14:4214:42, 11 June 2015 diff hist −80 Clan Douglas formatting; WP:REPCITE
• 14:0914:09, 11 June 2015 diff hist +3 Persecuted (film) ce

13 May 2015

• 15:1515:15, 13 May 2015 diff hist −17 Hyon Yong-chol Copyedit citations;CNN and Xinhuanet are not newspaper; news story/article titles are quoted, not italicized; etc.
• 15:0715:07, 13 May 2015 diff hist −13 Xinhua News Agency Xinhuanet is a website, not a domain, and .com is not part of its name.
• 15:0315:03, 13 May 2015 diff hist +375 Hyon Yong-chol →Execution: Added relevant info from sources; copyedit citations; removed FT cite, as that page requires membership, and the other three cites are sufficient.
• 14:4414:44, 13 May 2015 diff hist −5 Hyon Yong-chol →Execution: WP:OVERLINK
• 14:4414:44, 13 May 2015 diff hist +1 Hyon Yong-chol Fixed ref name
• 14:4014:40, 13 May 2015 diff hist +5 Hyon Yong-chol Seriously? The most appropriate and clear ref name you could come up with for a BBC News cite was ":0" ?
• 14:3814:38, 13 May 2015 diff hist +8 Hyon Yong-chol BBC News is not a newspaper, nor is it a "work". It's an organization, and therefore, a publisher, which isn't italicized.
• 14:3714:37, 13 May 2015 diff hist +18 Hyon Yong-chol For. Not "of". For.
• 14:3614:36, 13 May 2015 diff hist −5 Hyon Yong-chol The word is "was". Not "has been". "Has been" is used when describing a recent event (which violates WP:DATED), or when describing an event that began some time ago and is ongoing.

7 May 2015

• 18:4218:42, 7 May 2015 diff hist −1 Jupiter's Legacy (comic) →Characters: Redundant comma
• 18:4218:42, 7 May 2015 diff hist −1 Jupiter's Legacy (comic) →Characters: Fixed opening ref name tag
• 18:4118:41, 7 May 2015 diff hist +1 Jupiter's Legacy (comic) →Characters: fix ref tag
• 18:4018:40, 7 May 2015 diff hist +1,992 Jupiter's Legacy (comic) Added synopses for "Jupiter's Circle".
• 18:0218:02, 7 May 2015 diff hist +4 List of Saga characters wikilink
• 18:0118:01, 7 May 2015 diff hist +92 Talk:List of Saga characters header/banner
• 17:5817:58, 7 May 2015 diff hist +219 N Talk:List of Saga story arcs Headers/banners
• 17:5317:53, 7 May 2015 diff hist +5,351 Jupiter's Legacy (comic) Add Jupiter's Circle info; ce ref names for clarity; Issue 5 doesn't need "extended summary", just a straightforward one given its plot; rv citation movement w/out rationale by 109.153.179.55; WP:SEASON; etc.
• 17:5217:52, 7 May 2015 diff hist +8 J. Edgar Hoover fact tag
• 17:4817:48, 7 May 2015 diff hist +40 J. Edgar Hoover →Sexuality: ce
• 17:1917:19, 7 May 2015 diff hist −422 Clyde Tolson sites with user-generated content, like imdb, are not considered reliable under WP:USERG. In any event films are their own primary source for their credits per WP:FILMPLOT, and don't need a secondary source.

6 May 2015

• 15:5615:56, 6 May 2015 diff hist −26 1989 Tiananmen Square protests and massacre Ibid; the first citation of a source should include the full publication info, not the second or third; removed "spring of" per WP:SEASON; bare external links do not go in the article body, per WP:ELPOINTS; rm dead link; punctuation; etc.
• 15:3415:34, 6 May 2015 diff hist −758 1989 Tiananmen Square protests and massacre Consecutive cites of the same source in the same paragraph is OVERKILL. You don't need a cite for each sentence. Just one at the end of the final one; fact tags
• 15:2615:26, 6 May 2015 diff hist +29 Rogue (Marvel Comics) fixed cite

30 April 2015

• 19:1219:12, 30 April 2015 diff hist 0 Pop art Not a proper noun.
• 18:1718:17, 30 April 2015 diff hist +11 Charles Harrelson WP:TONE

29 April 2015

• 15:4215:42, 29 April 2015 diff hist +3 Roy Thomas Adding line break to put date on separate line in caption.

28 April 2015

• 19:0719:07, 28 April 2015 diff hist +1 Cecily Strong Why is this italicized?
• 17:2817:28, 28 April 2015 diff hist −2 History of Firefox One line break between sections and paragraphs, not two.