User contributions for 37.152.231.8

29 November 2020

• 13:2013:20, 29 November 2020 diff hist −150 Algorave →Description: removed pointless duplication of first sentence
• 11:0211:02, 29 November 2020 diff hist −351 Police radio code fixed appalling writing and style errors Tag: references removed
• 10:4510:45, 29 November 2020 diff hist −390 Iperf Removed useless section Tags: section blanking Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 10:4410:44, 29 November 2020 diff hist −27 Iperf Improved poor writing Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 November 2020

• 22:5122:51, 28 November 2020 diff hist −37 List of rivers by discharge →See also: article does not exist
• 22:4922:49, 28 November 2020 diff hist −4 List of rivers by discharge overlinking
• 20:3120:31, 28 November 2020 diff hist −2 Jazz (apple) No edit summary
• 20:2920:29, 28 November 2020 diff hist −209 Belle de Boskoop fixed style errors, removed statement of obvious and uncited claim
• 16:3416:34, 28 November 2020 diff hist −147 2019 Bahrain Grand Prix →Race: fixed garbage writing - "Leclerc was passed by Bottas dropping Leclerc to 3rd" was just woeful. removed uncited claim.
• 11:0311:03, 28 November 2020 diff hist −1 Mescaline No edit summary
• 10:4910:49, 28 November 2020 diff hist −75 The Nutcracker →Tchaikovsky: The Nutcracker Suite, Op. 71a: removed statement of obvious, fixed incorrect word
• 06:4406:44, 28 November 2020 diff hist −9 Cersei Lannister →Recognition and awards: fixed poor writing
• 06:1306:13, 28 November 2020 diff hist +1 Myrcella Baratheon →Season 5 and 6: People who do not understand how to write formally carelessly make work for those who do. Fixed sloppy work added in Special:Diff/844396650
• 05:3405:34, 28 November 2020 diff hist +5 Panama disease fixed grammar and style issues
• 05:2905:29, 28 November 2020 diff hist −69 Panama disease →Distribution: improved very poor grammar and style, looks like non-English speakers wrote this
• 05:0905:09, 28 November 2020 diff hist −192 Democratic Socialists of America removed false claim Tag: references removed
• 05:0905:09, 28 November 2020 diff hist −158 Democratic Socialists of America removed text from lead which is not mentioned in article. and do not start with a single-sentence fragment

27 November 2020

• 21:4121:41, 27 November 2020 diff hist −62 Jericka Duncan removed statement of obvious in a very poor opening sentence
• 15:2715:27, 27 November 2020 diff hist −1 R2-D2 →Cultural influence
• 15:2615:26, 27 November 2020 diff hist +9 R2-D2 →Cultural influence: fixed unprofessional writing, added by a user who is not a native English speaker and whose userpage falsely claims a professional level of English
• 15:2515:25, 27 November 2020 diff hist −162 R2-D2 Removed from the lead things which are not mentioned in the article.
• 12:5612:56, 27 November 2020 diff hist −1,184 Vmlinux →Object format: this has no encyclopaedic value Tag: section blanking
• 12:5512:55, 27 November 2020 diff hist −245 Vmlinux →bzImage: tidied up, wrote in paragraphs, removed excessively technical details and unnecessary external links
• 12:5212:52, 27 November 2020 diff hist +30 Vmlinux No edit summary
• 12:4612:46, 27 November 2020 diff hist −272 Woodpecker like most claimed collective nouns, this is unused in actual English
• 12:4412:44, 27 November 2020 diff hist −4 Collective noun No edit summary
• 09:0209:02, 27 November 2020 diff hist −6 Strom Thurmond Undid revision 990882488 by JTRH (talk) this is an encyclopaedia for English-speakers, not for Americans. This jargon is not used or widely understood outside the US. Tag: Undo
• 00:2000:20, 27 November 2020 diff hist −156 Sidney R. Yates removed redundant sentence and repetitions
• 00:1900:19, 27 November 2020 diff hist −52 List of members of the United States Congress by longevity of service It is useless to restate the article title in the first sentence, and it makes no sense to bold-face something which is not the article title. Tidied up the rest of the lead

26 November 2020

• 23:2223:22, 26 November 2020 diff hist +8 Walls of Jerusalem →See also: fixed infantile writing and silly formatting
• 23:0123:01, 26 November 2020 diff hist −6 Strom Thurmond Do not use jargon Tag: Reverted
• 20:4920:49, 26 November 2020 diff hist −183 Gordi (musician) where she is from is not relevant in the lead
• 20:4620:46, 26 November 2020 diff hist −26 East Coast Main Line →Popular culture
• 20:4520:45, 26 November 2020 diff hist −245 Aging in dogs fixed issues of tone and formatting
• 20:3020:30, 26 November 2020 diff hist +36 Morfydd Clark →Life and career: style
• 20:2820:28, 26 November 2020 diff hist +29 Vanessa Kirby →Theatre
• 19:3719:37, 26 November 2020 diff hist −1 Jeanine Pirro →Early life: Fixed absurd grammar error. People who don't speak English should not edit English Wikipedia.
• 14:0814:08, 26 November 2020 diff hist −37 Linux kernel →Interfaces: write neutrally and clearly
• 05:4105:41, 26 November 2020 diff hist −1 Respiro Fixed factual error presented ungrammatically
• 05:3905:39, 26 November 2020 diff hist −105 Respiro →Plot: Applied basic standards Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:2905:29, 26 November 2020 diff hist −16 Casino Royale (2006 film) →Cast: "only other" implies some vanishingly rare thing Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:4204:42, 26 November 2020 diff hist −597 Tara Palmer-Tomkinson →Drug addiction: Badly written, trivial Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:3804:38, 26 November 2020 diff hist −67 Tara Palmer-Tomkinson →Television appearances: repeating her surname in five consecutive sentences was just utterly bizarre

25 November 2020

• 22:3622:36, 25 November 2020 diff hist −34 Fargo (1996 film) →Plot: more concise
• 22:3322:33, 25 November 2020 diff hist −210 Fargo (1996 film) Plot section is already over 700 words Tag: Manual revert
• 19:4419:44, 25 November 2020 diff hist +26 Fargo (1996 film) →Plot
• 17:3817:38, 25 November 2020 diff hist −2 List of monarchs of the British Isles by cause of death less patronisingn
• 16:3316:33, 25 November 2020 diff hist −52 List of monarchs of the British Isles by cause of death removed pointless restatement of the article title
• 14:2814:28, 25 November 2020 diff hist −571 Rec 3: Genesis undid an edit which appears to have been an accidental restoration of a much older revision
• 09:0109:01, 25 November 2020 diff hist −2 Pair-instability supernova No edit summary