User contributions for 2601:246:C700:19D:FC3D:14F:D66A:29FA

1 March 2020

• 07:1507:15, 1 March 2020 diff hist +4 Ann Voskamp Copy edit. Italics added to title of periodical.
• 07:1207:12, 1 March 2020 diff hist +1 Compassion International Copy edit. Spelling correction.
• 07:0907:09, 1 March 2020 diff hist +612 User talk:Walter Görlitz/Archived Talk to 2020-12 →Attempting to make Compassion article more encyclopedic: new section
• 07:0407:04, 1 March 2020 diff hist +882 Compassion International Fixed Compassion Canada citation. Reduced unprecedented, overly long {{About |... message. Moved leadership to separate new section, since lead is supposed to summarize the article, not introduce new material. Whether board chairs, CEOs need mentioning in charitable organization leads may be discussed, but for sake of article lead accuracy over passing time, as well as reliance on third-party sources (which the rest of the lead HAS achieved), these first-party facts are relegated to main body.
• 05:5505:55, 1 March 2020 diff hist +33 Compassion International →History: Noting two sentences uncelar with regard to sourcing.
• 05:5005:50, 1 March 2020 diff hist +6 Compassion International →Ratings and accountability: Copy edit. Corrected markup issue.
• 05:5005:50, 1 March 2020 diff hist +1,078 Compassion International →Outcomes
• 05:2605:26, 1 March 2020 diff hist −10 Compassion International →Ratings and accountability: Copy edit. Inline citations go outside of punctuation, not inside. Noting need for update, since last sentence indicated a drop between 2015 and 2016, without further statements thereafter.
• 05:2105:21, 1 March 2020 diff hist +182 Compassion International →Countries of operation: Completed appearing source, noted need for third-party sourcing (fact-checked, independent content source), and noted that seconds tatement does not appear in the source appearing. Also edited opening statement to text appearing at that source (e.g., families are not mentioned there).
• 05:1305:13, 1 March 2020 diff hist +135 Compassion International →Donating countries: Reordered entries inverse chronologically, after finding them in no apparent order. Added bullets, so they do not appear as one sentence paragraphs. Otherwise, why are editors here breaking WP rules? There should be no purported factual information (non-summary information), of any sort here, without an inline citation that answers the question, "says who?". (Per WP:VERIFY, all claims require valid sources.)
• 04:5104:51, 1 March 2020 diff hist 0 User talk:MarnetteD →Has reFill undergone a change
• 04:5104:51, 1 March 2020 diff hist +358 User talk:MarnetteD →Has reFill undergone a change
• 04:4404:44, 1 March 2020 diff hist +658 User talk:MarnetteD →The Penguin and Me