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13 July 2021
- 00:0000:00, 13 July 2021 diff hist +548 User talk:LouisAragon →Aparat: new section
12 July 2021
- 23:5723:57, 12 July 2021 diff hist +587 Talk:Aparat →Copyediting: new section
- 23:5323:53, 12 July 2021 diff hist −494 Aparat →Aparat’s current status: Cripes, again, more fluff. You could honestly combine a bunch of these sections but I've run out of steam.
- 23:5023:50, 12 July 2021 diff hist −306 Aparat Of COURSE ads have to be vetted. What service doesn't vet ads? Tag: references removed
- 23:4923:49, 12 July 2021 diff hist −447 Aparat No, no, this entire section needs to go.
- 23:4823:48, 12 July 2021 diff hist −894 Aparat →Social impact: Gah, this is the biggest fluff problem. I've removed a bunch of redundant stuff but someone needs to cite a bunch of these claims because they don't seem unbiased. Also why the heck was a proper name in quotes?
- 23:4023:40, 12 July 2021 diff hist −41 Aparat →Aparat kids: Again, this is redundant, but since it's cited I'm not removing it entirely.
- 23:3823:38, 12 July 2021 diff hist −208 Aparat →Competitions: Seems... odd that the last information about the contest is from 2015, but I've chosen to keep with the tense of the article, which appears quite old...
- 23:3523:35, 12 July 2021 diff hist −3,394 Aparat →Aparat service features: The word Aparat appears way too often. You don't need to say the name every sentence. There is also a tremendous amount of redundancy and elaboration on basic features nearly every video site has. For completions sake I have left most of them, but I have removed repeated mentions as this is pointless. Also the entire section on embedding can be summed up in a single sentence.
- 23:2023:20, 12 July 2021 diff hist −95 Aparat →Video features: Why do we list this when the section below also explicitly calls it out? Lose this sentence.
- 23:1823:18, 12 July 2021 diff hist +1 Aparat →Video features
- 23:1823:18, 12 July 2021 diff hist −2,844 Aparat →Video features: Okay even more fixes... this is a mess. For one thing, there doesn't need to be an entire table listing what file formats can be uploaded. Listing several in the "Uploading" section is fine. And on second thought, none of this is important enough to have this many subcategories. It reads more like an advertisement that an article.
- 23:1023:10, 12 July 2021 diff hist −392 Aparat →History: More grammar fixing... and a whole lot of trimming of excess wording and fluff. I'm concerned about how many "On X date, Y happened" comments are here, but I don't have a strong enough opinion on what should and shouldn't be removed beyond this.
- 23:0123:01, 12 July 2021 diff hist −296 Aparat This sentence is not important enough for the lead. Also "by experts" doesn't make any sense
- 22:5922:59, 12 July 2021 diff hist −5 Aparat Fixing grammar, no need for "But" since it isn't refuting the previous claim that the website launched in 2011.
- 22:4822:48, 12 July 2021 diff hist +268 User talk:Karma1998/Archive 1 →I’ve seen your messages on my talk page. Am aware, thank you.
9 July 2021
- 00:0900:09, 9 July 2021 diff hist +167 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents →Adamant1 – incivility, aspersions, etc.