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This is my first article . I have made all the necessary changes as suggested by editors . Do i need to do anything else or is it ok now? Praj9289 (talk) 15:09, 17 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Here's some advice:
- The lead, ie the intro, should be a summary of what makes them notable. The lead's not long enough but I would suggest you write the lead after you've further developed the article because that's where you'll pulled the information from.
- The two sections Civil Disobedience Movement and Quit India Movement and death need more development. When I read this I don't know why this is important. What's the context? You're making an article that you're suggesting is globally notable so we need to know we should all know about. Flesh them out more and then someone might be able to help you trim them if necessary but it's easier to work with more than less.
- This isn't a legacy: "A book by historian Diwakar Prasad Singh, American Attitude Towards the Indian Nationalist Movement (1974), includes a preface on Shashi Prasad Singh's role in the freedom struggle." A lot of people are mentioned in books. You can use the book a source though.
