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Slope chart

A slope chart, also known as a slope graph or slope diagram, is a simple type of data visualization used to show the change between two points in time or two conditions. It connects data points for each category across two vertical axes with straight lines, making it easy to compare trends and rank shifts.

Overview

Slope charts emphasize how values increase or decrease between two states. They are especially useful when the goal is to highlight relative changes or rank differences in a clean, uncluttered way. The method gained popularity through the work of Edward Tufte, who featured slope graphs as an example of high information density with minimal visual noise in his book The Visual Display of Quantitative Information.

Structure

A typical slope chart contains:

Two vertical axes representing each point in time or condition.
Data points for each category on both axes.
Lines connecting the same category across the two axes.

The direction and steepness of the lines communicate the magnitude and direction of change: an upward slope indicates an increase, a downward slope indicates a decrease, and a flat line shows no change.

Uses

Slope charts are commonly used in business, education, demographics, and journalism. For example, they can show:

Changes in sales figures before and after a marketing campaign.
Test score comparisons between two exams.
Population shifts across two census years.
Rank changes in sports standings or survey results.

Because slope charts focus on only two points, they are best suited for simple comparative stories rather than complex time series.

Advantages and limitations

Advantages

Easy to interpret for a small number of categories.
Clearly shows both direction and magnitude of change.
Highlights rank swaps effectively.

Limitations

Becomes cluttered and harder to read with too many lines.
Not appropriate for tracking changes over multiple time periods.
Requires careful labeling to avoid confusion when lines cross.

Related charts

Slope charts are related to other comparative visualizations, including line charts, bump charts, and dumbbell plots. Each type serves a slightly different purpose depending on the complexity of the data and the number of time points.