Talk:Won't Get Fooled Again/GA1

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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 19:19, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I didn't do the album, so I might as well do this one! Will comment soon. FunkMonk (talk) 19:19, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"and the universal chord is sounded." Perhaps put "universal chord" in quote marks? Since it is apparently not some general thing, but can mean several, including:[1]
Perhaps there should even be a very short description of what the universal chord is? Since it is mentioned several times under background.
"Inayat Khan's The Mysticism of Sound and Music" Perhaps present the person? Nationality, occupation? Perhaps the same for Meher Baba, many readers may be unfamiliar with him.
Same could be said for the band members perhaps, present each member's role at first mention?
"a new demo was cut" perhaps "cut" is too informal wording?
" organ / synth track" should there really be space before and after the dash?
"a synthesizer had managed to be integrated so successfully within a rock group." Wouldn't it rather be within a rock song?
"as the choice of single as the group felt that song was "too much out of character"." Out of character for what? The album? Could add "single for the Who's Next album" or some such...
"Townshend has given mixed feelings" Expressed mixed feelings? Or is it a phrase I'm unfamiliar with?
"In 2003, Who's Next was reissued" perhaps add "Deluxe eidtion" somewhere in that sentence, so it will be easier to identify where it can be found.
"Their version of the song was released on their live album" The live album, for variation?
Is there anything more on why Townshend wouldn't allow the song to be used in Fahrenheit 9/11? it has always puzzled me a bit that he would then let it be used in a TV series instead...
"ltimately, Lifehouse as a project was abandoned in favour of Who's Next, a straightforward album, where it also became the closing track." This is only really mentioned in the lead, but should also then be in the article.
"The song has been performed as a staple of the band's setlist ever since it was first played that year" That year refers to a date which is not in the preceding sentence, so perhaps spell it out again?
"and was the last track Keith Moon played live with the band." Perhaps mention year?