Talk:Won't Get Fooled Again/GA1

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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 19:19, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I didn't do the album, so I might as well do this one! Will comment soon. FunkMonk (talk) 19:19, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"and the universal chord is sounded." Perhaps put "universal chord" in quote marks? Since it is apparently not some general thing, but can mean several, including:[1]
Perhaps there should even be a very short description of what the universal chord is? Since it is mentioned several times under background.
"Inayat Khan's The Mysticism of Sound and Music" Perhaps present the person? Nationality, occupation? Perhaps the same for Meher Baba, many readers may be unfamiliar with him.
Same could be said for the band members perhaps, present each member's role at first mention?
Perhaps mention that the "New York" version was released on the deluxe version of the album?
"a new demo was cut" perhaps "cut" is too informal wording?
" organ / synth track" should there really be space before and after the dash?
"a synthesizer had managed to be integrated so successfully within a rock group." Wouldn't it rather be within a rock song?
"as the choice of single as the group felt that song was "too much out of character"." Out of character for what? The album? Could add "single for the Who's Next album" or some such...