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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 19:19, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • I didn't do the album, so I might as well do this one! Will comment soon. FunkMonk (talk) 19:19, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and the universal chord is sounded." Perhaps put "universal chord" in quote marks? Since it is apparently not some general thing, but can mean several, including:[1]
  • Perhaps there should even be a very short description of what the universal chord is? Since it is mentioned several times under background.
  • "Inayat Khan's The Mysticism of Sound and Music" Perhaps present the person? Nationality, occupation? Perhaps the same for Meher Baba, many readers may be unfamiliar with him.
  • Same could be said for the band members perhaps, present each member's role at first mention?
  • Perhaps mention that the "New York" version was released on the deluxe version of the album?
  • "a new demo was cut" perhaps "cut" is too informal wording?
  • " organ / synth track" should there really be space before and after the dash?
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