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* A Reception section should not be a string light of quotes. Right now, there is a quote in every sentence beyond the summary of this section! Keep a handful of quotes whose wording is particularly useful or noteworthy and paraphrase the rest. |
* A Reception section should not be a string light of quotes. Right now, there is a quote in every sentence beyond the summary of this section! Keep a handful of quotes whose wording is particularly useful or noteworthy and paraphrase the rest. |
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* Review best practices for albums at [[MOS:ALBUM]]. |
* Review best practices for albums at [[MOS:ALBUM]]. |
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:41, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
This is a quickfail. At this time, I think the organization of background information is not where it should be for this type of article. The reception section also requires significant work to bring it to standard; it is overly quote-based.
Suggestions for the nominator:
- Increase the detail on the background and development of the album. Add some context about past releases. Look at other album GAs to see how this is done.
- A Reception section should not be a string light of quotes. Right now, there is a quote in every sentence beyond the summary of this section! Keep a handful of quotes whose wording is particularly useful or noteworthy and paraphrase the rest.
- Review best practices for albums at MOS:ALBUM.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.