User contributions for 2605:A000:FFC0:44:6C8E:EDA2:BE46:E2C

24 July 2015

• 05:1105:11, 24 July 2015 diff hist −14 Serena Williams Undid revision 672815751 by Thad caldwell (talk) very odd phrasing, revert to standard wording
• 00:5100:51, 24 July 2015 diff hist −184 Martina Navratilova Does not belong in lede. Moved AARP content to appropriate section, where involvement with animal rights, underprivildeged children, and gay rights is already included. Removed sports academy reference- unimportant and unsourced.

23 July 2015

• 23:0223:02, 23 July 2015 diff hist −114 Martina Navratilova Moved to relevant section; individual opinions do not belong in the lede (and these are from 7+ years ago).
• 18:5918:59, 23 July 2015 diff hist +4 Serena Williams grammar
• 06:2606:26, 23 July 2015 diff hist 0 Serena Williams Undid revision 672565006 by Tristar009 (talk) Fyunck(click) is correct

22 July 2015

• 07:3507:35, 22 July 2015 diff hist +3 Serena Williams Undid revision 672473739 by Baseball Watcher (talk) was accurate as is per sources

20 July 2015

• 19:5419:54, 20 July 2015 diff hist −322 Serena Williams →Miami Dolphins venture: Clarification of sisters' ownership stake per source, removed unnecessary content, added proximity of sisters' home to stadium
• 17:4617:46, 20 July 2015 diff hist 0 Dustin Johnson →Personal Life: lower case L
• 17:2617:26, 20 July 2015 diff hist +861 Dustin Johnson Added Personal Life section

18 July 2015

• 23:2723:27, 18 July 2015 diff hist −10 User talk:Fyunck(click) →Serena Williams: m
• 23:2723:27, 18 July 2015 diff hist +1,421 User talk:Fyunck(click) →Serena Williams: new section
• 22:4222:42, 18 July 2015 diff hist −313 Serena Williams Undid revision 672050669 by Thad caldwell (talk) 1 random event where proceeds went to charity. (also unreliable sources- an amateur blog & a direct link to the charity w/ pic of SW)

17 July 2015

• 08:0308:03, 17 July 2015 diff hist −16 Serena Williams remove excessive Sharapova wikilinks
• 07:5807:58, 17 July 2015 diff hist −333 Serena Williams Undid revision by Thad caldwell to remove random unimportant quote of one person's opinion. Her serve is already appropriately addressed. You continue to make similar fan-page ype edits after being asked several times to stop & get consensus on talk page.
• 02:5202:52, 17 July 2015 diff hist −489 Serena Williams Undid revision 671780784 by Thad caldwell (talk) Unimportant/not encylopedic. When a user deletes your content, you need to get consensus (and not just a couple opinions).

16 July 2015

• 22:5522:55, 16 July 2015 diff hist −489 Serena Williams Undid revision 671770848 by Thad caldwell As you've been told by others, this is not a Serena Williams fan page. Also you are editing under multiple identities including 97.82.223.215 and possibly jh122.
• 19:2119:21, 16 July 2015 diff hist −2,172 Serena Williams →On-court activities: Not encylopedic and you were asked to discuss it on the talk page to get consensus. You were previously warned about edit warring for similar content in the lead.
• 00:2600:26, 16 July 2015 diff hist −3,193 Serena Williams →On-court activities: Sorry but a lengthy new section on some random nickname does not belong. Please discuss it's value on the talk page and get consensus.

14 July 2015

• 01:5501:55, 14 July 2015 diff hist −24 Jessie Pavelka →Personal life: not encylopedic (and unsourced)

12 July 2015

• 05:5605:56, 12 July 2015 diff hist +1 Serena Williams Undid revision 671064630 by Thad caldwell (talk)
• 01:3801:38, 12 July 2015 diff hist +12 Serena Williams Correct grammar and rewrite for accuracy and objectivity per included sources. The Atlantic writers says "arguably" the best of her era
• 01:1101:11, 12 July 2015 diff hist −38 Serena Williams Remove flowery, unsourced content
• 01:0601:06, 12 July 2015 diff hist −120 Serena Williams Condense content regarding her greatness and present objectively ; don't need to repeat the same theme three times.

11 July 2015

• 00:3100:31, 11 July 2015 diff hist −8 Serena Williams "is considered to be" implies that it's fact and does so in Wikipedia's voice. And "considered to be" by whom? Subjective opinions cannot be written as objective facts.
• 00:2600:26, 11 July 2015 diff hist −6 Serena Williams There are only 3 (weak) sources that show 4 former players - McEnroe, Evert, King and Agassi - and 0 commentators besides McEnroe saying she's the greatest ever. While "many" indeed may say it, sources must be included to prove it. And what is "many"?