User contributions for 2602:30A:C7D7:E590:4038:8BD9:CDE:89A7

12 November 2016

• 13:3913:39, 12 November 2016 diff hist −119 Rajdeep Sardesai More grammatical changes. Removed unnecessary reference. Tag: references removed
• 13:3713:37, 12 November 2016 diff hist −21 Rajdeep Sardesai Tense confusion. Made grammatical change to reflect it..
• 13:3613:36, 12 November 2016 diff hist −190 Rajdeep Sardesai "He has also been the President....." This line appears in Awards. So why should it appear again in Career? This is puffery and padding. Redundant material deleted according to Wiki rules.
• 13:3313:33, 12 November 2016 diff hist −107 Rajdeep Sardesai →Books: Preceeding line before book's title is irrelevant and immaterial. WP:NPOV allows name of book, year or publisher, not unreferenced stories before that.
• 13:3113:31, 12 November 2016 diff hist +142 Rajdeep Sardesai →Awards: Two honors clubbed in one line. Three supposed honors are not referenced properly, hence would seem biased or poorly referenced
• 13:2913:29, 12 November 2016 diff hist 0 Rajdeep Sardesai →Controversies: Corrected date of apology issued
• 13:2813:28, 12 November 2016 diff hist −222 Rajdeep Sardesai →Career: "During the total career, he has covered major national .." That line is ungrammatical, what is called "butler English" Moreover two lines do not make a paragraph. Content is redundant on why he is noteworthy. Already established above.
• 13:2613:26, 12 November 2016 diff hist −186 Rajdeep Sardesai →Career: Direct quote supposedly by Rajdeep is irrelevant here POV quotation removed in accordance with WP: NPOV Entry should be neutral and not read like a press release or PR piece. Discussion welcome. ANI oversight suggested.
• 13:1513:15, 12 November 2016 diff hist +951 Talk:Rajdeep Sardesai →New York incident: Youtube is not used as a primary source or a source at all. All primary sources are reputed journalistic sources. Incident is being suppressed..
• 13:0713:07, 12 November 2016 diff hist +1,116 Rajdeep Sardesai Brawl is being suppressed with ill founded logic and arguments Incident is based on reputed and reliable sources Ugog Nizdast cites a wiki page which makes no references to cited sources. ANI oversight requested.