Beiträge von Wikipeterproject

22. Januar 2014

• 00:2000:20, 22. Jan. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +68 Pleshey Castle →Pleshey Castle: the current duke was not executed in the 14th century!

3. Oktober 2013

• 21:3321:33, 3. Okt. 2013 Unterschied Versionen −6 Echosmith →Music Career: Fixing style/layout errors
• 21:2621:26, 3. Okt. 2013 Unterschied Versionen −567 Echosmith →Tour Dates: tour dates are not encyclopedic unless the tour itself is notable

2. Oktober 2013

• 21:0421:04, 2. Okt. 2013 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Mark Brandon Read →Personal life: Fixing style/layout errors
• 21:0321:03, 2. Okt. 2013 Unterschied Versionen +50 Mark Brandon Read →Personal life: Removed names of children (not notable). Added cn tags for family detail
• 21:0121:01, 2. Okt. 2013 Unterschied Versionen −31 Mark Brandon Read →Personal life: New sub-section; a little further trimming of excessive detail
• 21:0021:00, 2. Okt. 2013 Unterschied Versionen −1.165 Mark Brandon Read →Personal life: Removed numerous quotes (mostly a WP:UNDUE issue)
• 20:5420:54, 2. Okt. 2013 Unterschied Versionen +6 Mark Brandon Read →Personal life: Prose, so that sentence actually makes sense
• 20:5220:52, 2. Okt. 2013 Unterschied Versionen +167 Mark Brandon Read →Criminal activity: Prose improvement, removal of name not elsewhere mentioned and inclusion of citation

12. Dezember 2012

• 08:4008:40, 12. Dez. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +1.104 K Hanging Lake Cat fix

23. Juni 2012

• 07:1407:14, 23. Jun. 2012 Unterschied Versionen −1.577 Ken Bennett →Family incident: Removed section - this is not about Bennett, but his son. The references do not suggest anything untoward in relation to the subject of the article and criticism is levelled elsewhere.
• 07:1107:11, 23. Jun. 2012 Unterschied Versionen −722 Ken Bennett →Awards: Removed entire section - minor, non-notable award
• 07:1007:10, 23. Jun. 2012 Unterschied Versionen −693 Ken Bennett →Awards: Removed POV and associated tag/template
• 07:0707:07, 23. Jun. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +18 Ken Bennett →Secretary of State: Removed POV commentary not included in cited source and replaced with clause reflecting what the article actually says.

1. Mai 2012

• 08:3708:37, 1. Mai 2012 Unterschied Versionen +1.126 Hanging Lake →Travertine: WP is not a guide
• 08:3608:36, 1. Mai 2012 Unterschied Versionen +1.310 Hanging Lake →Hiking The Trail To Get To The Lake: WP is not a tourist guide

6. Oktober 2011

• 09:4809:48, 6. Okt. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +36 K Steve Wiebe →Personal life: cn tag
• 09:4709:47, 6. Okt. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −111 Steve Wiebe tidy up

31. August 2011

• 18:0518:05, 31. Aug. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −1 K Lester Sumrall →Biography: typo
• 18:0418:04, 31. Aug. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +670 Lester Sumrall →Biography: added reference
• 17:4717:47, 31. Aug. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +35 Lester Sumrall Needs better referencing
• 17:4617:46, 31. Aug. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +6 Lester Sumrall Added middle name to lead section
• 17:4517:45, 31. Aug. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −265 Lester Sumrall →Biography: Removed non-encyclopedic content, added four CN tags, prose and grammar tweaks

16. Juli 2011

• 20:4520:45, 16. Jul. 2011 Unterschied Versionen 0 Balgonie Castle refimprove
• 20:4520:45, 16. Jul. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +30 Balgonie Castle Needs better referencing
• 20:4420:44, 16. Jul. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +14 Balgonie Castle →Hauntings: claimed to be...

10. Juni 2010

• 22:2822:28, 10. Jun. 2010 Unterschied Versionen −130 Australisches Pfund →The Australian pound: a national currency: Tidy up to make text truer to the source

4. Mai 2010

• 20:5220:52, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen +366 Abdul Sattar Edhi →International awards: reference for award
• 20:4520:45, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −5 Abdul Sattar Edhi Wife's name as per entry in WP (+punct)
• 20:3620:36, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −72 Abdul Sattar Edhi No need for citation in lead if fact is verified elsewhere in article
• 20:3620:36, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −4 Abdul Sattar Edhi →The Edhi Foundation: list: remove one "and"
• 20:3520:35, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −18 Abdul Sattar Edhi →The Edhi Foundation: specific mention of offices in the US not important
• 20:3420:34, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −13 Abdul Sattar Edhi →The Edhi Foundation: prose
• 20:3220:32, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −152 Abdul Sattar Edhi →Honors and awards: reference already neamed
• 20:3120:31, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen +338 Abdul Sattar Edhi →Early life: Added citation
• 20:2520:25, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −445 Abdul Sattar Edhi Removed non-notable and uncited national awards, including educational and long service awards
• 20:2020:20, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −549 Abdul Sattar Edhi →Honors received: Removed non-notable international awards (including them detracts from the notable ones!)
• 20:1720:17, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen 0 Abdul Sattar Edhi →Travel issues: punctuation
• 20:1620:16, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −737 Abdul Sattar Edhi Removed commentary from Gaza refusal - no need to copy the entire reference to the article
• 20:1120:11, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −4 Abdul Sattar Edhi Removed commentary from Detention section. Used the source to expand the Foundation section.
• 20:0220:02, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −77 Abdul Sattar Edhi →The Edhi Foundation: Removed the "autobiography", which is in fact a biography to "See Also"
• 20:0120:01, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen +26 Abdul Sattar Edhi →See also: Pakistan and the Foundation are mentioned in the article and therefore not needed in a "See Also" list. Imoved the biography to the list
• 20:0020:00, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −802 Abdul Sattar Edhi →Modern legacy: Removed uncited and POV material (the honarary doctorate is mentioned under "Awards", with reference)
• 19:5719:57, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −2.571 Abdul Sattar Edhi Removed uncited and POV material in accordance with Wikipedia BLP policy
• 19:5519:55, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen +379 Abdul Sattar Edhi New section on Edhi Foundation
• 19:5119:51, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen +285 Abdul Sattar Edhi →Early life: Added proper citation
• 19:4719:47, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −473 Abdul Sattar Edhi Removed uncited material and POV
• 19:4219:42, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −518 Abdul Sattar Edhi →Early life: Removed uncited claims and POV
• 19:4119:41, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Abdul Sattar Edhi spacing
• 19:4019:40, 4. Mai 2010 Unterschied Versionen −313 Abdul Sattar Edhi Removed POV, flowery prose and uncited claim (as per last edit)