Beiträge von Middle 8

2. Februar 2016

• 03:4103:41, 2. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Blackstar (Album) sp. hidden
• 03:4103:41, 2. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Blackstar (Album) sp. hidden

1. Februar 2016

• 11:4111:41, 1. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +702 Blackstar (Album) proper title ★ w/ source in infobox + lede, but keeping "Blackstar" for article body, per MOS:TM and WP:COMMONNAME. See talk. Also cf. Love Symbol Album
• 11:4111:41, 1. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +702 Blackstar (Album) proper title ★ w/ source in infobox + lede, but keeping "Blackstar" for article body, per MOS:TM and WP:COMMONNAME. See talk. Also cf. Love Symbol Album

28. Januar 2016

• 09:2609:26, 28. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +511 Blackstar (Album) Album's title is in fact ★ -- per Bowie's own site. Fixed throughout. To forestall edit warring, have a look: http://store.davidbowie.com/blackstar/blackstar-cd.html ~~ quote: "★ (pronounced “Blackstar”) is David Bowie’s 28th studio album..."
• 09:2609:26, 28. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +511 Blackstar (Album) Album's title is in fact ★ -- per Bowie's own site. Fixed throughout. To forestall edit warring, have a look: http://store.davidbowie.com/blackstar/blackstar-cd.html ~~ quote: "★ (pronounced “Blackstar”) is David Bowie’s 28th studio album..."

8. Juni 2015

• 06:5306:53, 8. Jun. 2015 Unterschied Versionen 0 K Buckfast Tonic Wine →Versions: both ==> each

7. Juni 2015

• 09:3709:37, 7. Jun. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −620 Buckfast Tonic Wine →Versions: rm OR/SYN re metabolism, rephrase concisely

23. Mai 2012

• 14:1314:13, 23. Mai 2012 Unterschied Versionen +487 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center rv to version dated04:26, 13 May 2012 --understandable edit, but this info shouldn't *only* be in lead; see WP:LEAD. At least one mention in rest of article is needed. Two? Yes, if the bans were distinct -- I or somebody will look at this later

29. April 2012

• 04:0904:09, 29. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen −240 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center Undid revision 489164211 by 138.238.231.226 (talk) -- video of shock torture is already in Fox News references, and this isn't appropriate writing for WP -- put it on a blog

22. April 2012

• 11:0011:00, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen −10 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center →Characterization of shocks as torture: clean up wording; eliminate redundancy; NPOV wording
• 10:4810:48, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +5 K Judge Rotenberg Educational Center oops add "been"
• 07:5207:52, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +135 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center reword & ref controversy line in lede
• 06:2406:24, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen −4 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center change JREC to JRC throughout, for consistency (this is the abbrev they use)
• 06:2206:22, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +2 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center oops, complete sentence in lede
• 06:1906:19, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +147 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center rm "laughing" allegation -- only plaintiff's mother has reported this at this time. Add info from source re: hospital diagnosis
• 05:5505:55, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen −3 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center →Characterization of shocks as torture: adj quote
• 05:5305:53, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +42 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center →External links: who am I to argue with the UN?
• 05:4905:49, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +292 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center →Andre McCollins lawsuit and videotape: add another ref, this one to a longer excerpt from video -- graphic, includes mention of staff laughing. Move a ref to better place
• 05:4505:45, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +673 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center Add controversy to lede -- proper weight of sources demands it. Controversy and criticism are overwhelming. Source to ABC Nightline re torture and Fox re graphic videotape released this month during trial
• 05:3505:35, 22. Apr. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +2.968 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center →Controversy: Add balancing material on shocks as torture from ABC Nightline quoting UN official (balances subject's selfpub mat'l). Breakout sections, add some re recent lawsuit & video, with some sources & more to come

14. November 2011

• 10:3210:32, 14. Nov. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −4 Aimee Semple McPherson →Career: per NPOV, replace self-serving "ascended on" venue with "went to" venue

1. September 2011

• 12:0512:05, 1. Sep. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +14 K 420 (Cannabis-Kultur) →See also: update wl to reflect article title, bypassing redirect

30. Juni 2011

• 10:0010:00, 30. Jun. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −4.008 Cola-Mentos-Fontäne add parens -- sentence is precise but pretty long; parens make it more readable
• 09:5909:59, 30. Jun. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −4.010 Cola-Mentos-Fontäne explain process in lead, with wikilinks
• 09:4409:44, 30. Jun. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −4.290 Cola-Mentos-Fontäne self-rv - I was mistaken; the other ingredients apparently do have some (minor) effect
• 09:2809:28, 30. Jun. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −4.347 Cola-Mentos-Fontäne it's just the carbon dioxide
• 09:2109:21, 30. Jun. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −4.290 Cola-Mentos-Fontäne rm style tag from May 2010. Reads fine now. (brief note on talk)

27. Februar 2010

• 08:2508:25, 27. Feb. 2010 Unterschied Versionen +55 Judge Rotenberg Educational Center Let's not hide behind scientific-sounding words like "aversives". Specifics like electric shock belong in lead -- without these appalling tortures, the place would hardly be notable.