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07:4807:48, 3 April 2025 diff hist 0 Tim Omotoso Added Source 6 (newspaper article reporting on acquital of Omotoso on 02 April 2025). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
07:4307:43, 3 April 2025 diff hist +559 Tim Omotoso No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11:3411:34, 30 March 2025 diff hist +1 m The Africans: A Triple Heritage Correction of grammar structure - by insertion of Possessive Mark/Symbol (') - to improve the contextual comprehension of the Noun (continent), thus: continent's. Where the original sentence erroneously contextualised it in the Plural Form (continent's). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
09:3609:36, 30 March 2025 diff hist +2 m Chung Eui-sun Correction of grammar structure - by removing "of" and replacing with "from" in the phrase: "After graduation of Korea University,..." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

07:0307:03, 8 December 2024 diff hist −3 Blue box Original phrase with the repetition of "is": ..although in the picture the operator's finger is on the KP key and the ST key is visible. Improved phrase by removing repeated "is": ...although in the picture the operator's finger on the KP key and the ST key is visible. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17:3117:31, 7 December 2024 diff hist −4 2012 Yahoo Voices hack Replaced the adjective/adverb "together" with the adverb "hard", to fix or improve sentence comprehension. Original sentence: "Yahoo! said in a written statement that it takes security very seriously and is working together to fix the vulnerability in its site." Improved sentence: "Yahoo! said in a written statement that it takes security very seriously and is working hard to fix the vulnerability in its site." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:5615:56, 7 December 2024 diff hist +565 User talk:Zefr →Request for Peer Review: Philip II invasion of Portugal - 1850: new section Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
15:3915:39, 7 December 2024 diff hist +3 House of Aviz Original sentence with typographical/grammatical omission of a preposition "is": "In Portugal he generally considered not as a national king,...". Improved sentence:"In Portugal he is generally considered not as a national king,..." Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:3015:30, 7 December 2024 diff hist +216 House of Aviz Modified a sentence which lacked mention of King Philip II as the key figure authorizing the cession of Portugal as source 7 accurately intended to fulfill that epsitemological gap. Modified thus:"King Philip II of Spain was one of seven... under the command of Don Fernando Álvarez de Toledo, Duke of Alba." Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19:2319:23, 23 November 2024 diff hist +9 Danny Lui Awarded parentheses to the secondary proper noun - 'Lenovo' to recognize the primary proper noun - 'Legend'. In the sentence: "In 1994, Lui led Legend (Lenovo) through a successful IPO on the Hong Kong Stock Exchange and the company is currently the largest PC manufacturer in China.[1]". Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18:2918:29, 23 November 2024 diff hist +3 Danny Lui Re-assigned capital letters to the proper noun 'Legend Holdings', to improve the original sentence: "...co-founded the legend group, known as Lenovo in Hong Kong,..." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18:1818:18, 23 November 2024 diff hist 0 Danny Lui Rectified the proper noun 'Lenovo' mistaken as 'Legend', in the original sentence: "In 1994, Lui led Legend through a successful IPO on the Hong Kong..." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18:0318:03, 23 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Danny Lui Original sentence with error: "In 1982, Denny returned to Hong Kong and started his first business, Daw Computer Systems, Ltd." Rectified the first name "Danny" by replacing the letter 'e' with 'a'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

04:4404:44, 22 November 2024 diff hist +3 Annexation of Tibet by China Improved sentence by adding the preposition 'in', thus: "...in 1912." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22:0222:02, 16 October 2024 diff hist +1 m Living Standards Measure Corrected tense. Original Statement: "LSM is a marketing and research tool ( same as social economic class: SEC but more refine )". Improved Statement:"LSM is a marketing and research tool ( same as social economic class: SEC but more refined )" current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18:4718:47, 4 October 2024 diff hist +8 Duduzane Zuma →Politics: Changed the tense. Original Statement:"He announced he plans on running for president in the next election as a candidate for the ANC..." Improved Statement:"He announced he plans on running for president in the 29 May 2024 election as a candidate for the ANC..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13:1113:11, 4 October 2024 diff hist −1 Anton Rupert →Business career: Removed the monotony in the repetition of the surname, for the father and son relationship. Original Statement: "Rupert's eldest son, Johann Rupert, is now the CEO of Richemont and chairman of Remgro." Improved Statement:"Anton's eldest son, Johann Rupert, is now the CEO of Richemont and chairman of Remgro. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17:0517:05, 25 September 2024 diff hist −1 Sasfin Bank →Controversy: Fixed minor past participle error Original Statement: "...helped facilitated..." Improved Statement: "...helped facilitate..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14:4214:42, 24 September 2024 diff hist +3 Berenice IV →Biography: Minor grammar error. Fixed syntax. Original Statement:"Ptolemy Auletes was initially unable take his kingdom back from the two queens." Improved Statement:"...Ptolemy Auletes was initially unable to take his kingdom back from the two queens." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14:0614:06, 22 September 2024 diff hist −1 Tencent →2015–2020: Continued investments: Rectified plural noun versus plural verb agreement (replaced verb "takes" with "take") Original Statement: "...where they can takes classes related to..." Improved Statement: "where they can take classes related to..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22:3522:35, 21 September 2024 diff hist +5 Business intelligence software Insertion of acronym of BI as a language comprehension protocol "first appearance incidence". A protocol which assists reader's memory in subsequent appearances. Subsequence as appearance (of the acronym), must not be initial appearance (of the acronym). Original Statement: "...and report data for business intelligence." Improved Statement: "...and report data for business intelligence (BI)." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:3317:33, 21 September 2024 diff hist +3 Grant Thornton →Assetco: Minor grammar error Original Statement: "...was ordered pay £21..." Improved Statement: "...was ordered to pay £21..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14:1714:17, 19 September 2024 diff hist +3 Daniel S. Loeb →Third Point Foundation: Improved grammar Original statement:"...$45 million in assets at the end 2016." Improved statement:"...$45 million in assets at the end of 2016.' Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11:4111:41, 19 September 2024 diff hist +1 Avis Southern Africa →History: Insertion of a full stop punctuation. Original statement: "...name Avis Following the adoption of the Avis name, the..." Improved Statement:"...name Avis. Following the adoption of the Avis name, the..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17:2917:29, 16 September 2024 diff hist −4 Sony Vaio UX Micro PC →References in popular culture: Fixed a minor typo to improve comprehension. Original:"R. Kelly looks at Usher's slideshow of the a lady on what appears to be the Sony VGN-UX 390 in the music video for Same Girl.[2]" Action: Removed ..."a"..., as appearing thus "the a lady" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12:5312:53, 14 September 2024 diff hist 0 GSM →Enhancements: Fixed typo Original phrase:"1800 MHz network became operational in the UK by 1993, called and DCS 1800." Improved Phrase:"1800 MHz network became operational in the UK by 1993, called and DCS 1800." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14:2014:20, 10 September 2024 diff hist +8 List of heritage sites in KwaZulu-Natal Fixed type - an incomplete adverb. Added "immaculate". Original sentence with error: "....one of the most im architectural..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15:3915:39, 8 September 2024 diff hist +225 User talk:ZAWADI NPC →Thanks for the Reply & Guidance: new section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
15:3715:37, 8 September 2024 diff hist +218 User talk:Lotje →Well Wishes: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic

17:1017:10, 6 September 2024 diff hist +535 User talk:Bishonen →Thanks for your inputs: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
16:5816:58, 6 September 2024 diff hist +107 m Monarchy of Lesotho Described the common noun Marena as a plural form Kings, with its singular form Morena being King, in Sesotho language. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
07:5707:57, 6 September 2024 diff hist +457 Wikipedia:Village pump (technical) →Technical Powers to "Block": new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic

06:4106:41, 19 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Patrice Motsepe Changed the "year" error in the photo caption statement, originally appearing as 1924: "Motsepe handing the CAF Confederation Cup trophy to Zamalek's captain Shikabala, Cairo in May 1924" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
06:3506:35, 19 June 2024 diff hist +1 Patrice Motsepe Firstly, corrected typographical error by insertion of a capital letter "R" to improve the proper noun status of the South African currency Rand. Secondly, added "s" to denote a plural form of Rands. Original phrase:... million rand.... Changed phrase.... million Rands. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20:4420:44, 16 June 2024 diff hist +1 Brett Kebble Spelling error, corrected by inserting 'c' in a proper noun Schultz, which appeared in this paragraph:"During the Agliotti trial, Shultz testified that Kebble, through John Stratton, ordered the murder of several people, including Martin Welz, the editor of Noseweek." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20:3720:37, 16 June 2024 diff hist +7 Brett Kebble Inserted the acronym BKAA in the first paragraph, as it appeared first time in the fourth paragraph without prior bracketed appearance as per standard protocol for notation of proper phrases assigned acronyms: As it appeared in fourth paragraph - "In February 2006, artist Deborah Weber opened a solo exhibition in Johannesburg called Art Media Media Art on the same day that the BKAA were to open at the Cape Town International Convention Centre." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20:2320:23, 16 June 2024 diff hist −4 Irish Rebellion of 1798 Improved sentence comprehension by removing one past participle "had", which appeared to three times to thus:"In later exile, he was to claim that he might have made an attempt on Ireland (instead of sailing in May 1798 for Egypt) had had he had confidence in Tone the other United Irish agents appearing in Paris. He describes them as divided in opinion and constantly quarrelling." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
09:3409:34, 16 June 2024 diff hist +36 m Shebeen Improved meaning in the phrase:"... serving commercial beers", by replacing it with:"... serving diverse commercial brands from beer, cider and whisky...". Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
09:1209:12, 16 June 2024 diff hist −2 m Pass law Sentence comprehension improved: by replacing "There", with "The" in the start of the sentence:"There (The) vociferous opposition to the pass laws are of no surprise, considering the “fact that black women in South Africa have traditionally taken a more active role in mass popular protest”, in comparison to men" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16:4716:47, 4 May 2024 diff hist +179 User talk:ZAWADI NPC →May 2024: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
16:1316:13, 4 May 2024 diff hist +198 User talk:ZAWADI NPC →Speedy deletion nomination of User:ZAWADI NPC: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
15:0715:07, 4 May 2024 diff hist +65 User talk:ZAWADI NPC No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
07:1807:18, 4 May 2024 diff hist +2 Duke Reid →Biography: Fixed a sentence comprehension structure. With the original sentence lacking logic and sense:"By the 1970s, Reid's poor health and the trend towards Rastafarian influenced roots reggae noticeably reduced the number of releases from Treasure Isle." The fix is an attempt to improve understanding for the reader by adding a continuous tense of the auxiliary verb: "reducing", and preceding it with a pause (comma) the first original verb:"influenced" as link of two ideas/actions in a... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19:1919:19, 3 May 2024 diff hist +4 Tau Zero →Plot: Improved intonation by removing twicely repeated adjective "enough", with the synonym "adequately". Original sentence:"They must wait, flying free but essentially without the ability to change course, until they randomly encounter enough galactic matter to decelerate enough to search for habitable planets." Improved sentence intonation thus:"They must wait, flying free but essentially without the ability to change course, until they randomly encounter enough galactic matter to decel... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18:0718:07, 3 May 2024 diff hist −23 Ethnogenesis →Jews: Removed the monotonous/repetitive inclusion of the phrase:" In classical antiquity", as appearing in the original sentence:"In classical antiquity, Jewish, Greek and Roman authors frequently referred to the Jewish people in classical antiquity as an ethnos, one of the numerous ethne that lived in the Greco-Roman world." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:1117:11, 3 May 2024 diff hist +3 Liu Cixin Omission of "is" as the auxiliary or linking verb rectified in the phrase: "Liu said that this "not what Chinese people care about", .... The phrase was corrected thus:"Liu said that this is "not what Chinese people care about", .... Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

08:0308:03, 4 April 2024 diff hist +4 Polymath Minor typographical correction, by insertion of "are" to assist in grammatical comprehension of the following sentence/statement: "These typologies are based on real creative production records first published by Root-Bernstein, Bernstein, and Garnier (1993)." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23:2623:26, 5 February 2024 diff hist +1 Ezra Suruma Formed a paragraph linking topic sentence with supporting sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23:2423:24, 5 February 2024 diff hist +1 Ezra Suruma No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23:2323:23, 5 February 2024 diff hist +2 m Ezra Suruma Added a punctuation mark (full stop), originally missing to separate sentence one from sentence two which began with a capital letter, as demonstrated by the error below: "Ezra Suruma (born 11 November 1945), is a Ugandan economist, banker, and academician He became the chancellor of Makerere University in January 2016." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

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