Talk:Tegetthoff class battleship/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 15:16, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Comments:
- Same deal as the last GA review. If you think any of my edits are incorrect, go ahead and revert them.
- The first paragraph of the construction section is largely uncited. I don't know if the information belongs to cite #8, but if so the reference should be moved to the end of the paragraph.
- I'm not sure about the image gallery, although I'll let that be your call. Maybe a link to commons is better (like your other article).
- The image gallery is used on the Szent Istvan article and I think it looks nice here but if you want it gone, you can remove it. No issues here.--White Shadows Your guess is as good as mine 23:03, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
- "...which became a problem as the war gressed..." → I looked up the word "gressed" and could not find a definition.
- Fixed to say Progressed.--White Shadows Your guess is as good as mine 23:03, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
"After it was clear that Austria-Hungary had lost World War I, the Austrian government decided to give the ship, along with much of the fleet, to the newly-formed State of Slovenes, Croats and Serbs."→ Which ship, this article is on a class?- I restructured that paragraph, as per above.
- Just out of curiosity, you write that the sinking of the Szent Istvan was filmed. Does this film exist? Is it copyrighted? It would be interesting to have a picture of the ship capsizing.
- A picture does exist of the ship capsizing and the film was sold to the US to assist Austia in the inter-war years. There is a link to it on the Szent Istvan article and I can add it to this one as well if you want.--White Shadows Your guess is as good as mine 22:48, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
- Otherwise, this looks good. JonCatalán(Talk) 16:09, 6 October 2010 (UTC)