Talk:Cosmophasis umbratica

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This page is off to an O.K. start. Citations need to be added to many sections, but I am not sure where some of the information was taken from so I could not add them. I added a few citations in areas where it was evident what article or book was being referenced. I also corrected some typos and rephrased unclear syntax. Wording was informal at times, so I altered many phrases. I also added some information about habitat. Cjing99 (talk) 01:49, 31 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 15 September 2020 and 17 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ahamed01. Peer reviewers: 17lchang, Cjing99, Delanieludmir.

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I found this article very informative and well written. There was some really interesting information with great citations. I edited a few grammatical errors as well as the description section to make the difference between the male and female spider bodies more clear 17lchang (talk) 20:18, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Overall, Amal’s Wikipedia page was very informative and provided a wide variety of topics that would give a great foundation for the behavior and general characteristics of C. umbratica. Throughout the page, one of the major edits I made were grammatical and syntax corrections to help the flow of the article. In addition, I fixed the wording for one of the pictures and slightly changed a header section to make it more concise. I also added more information into the initial description of the spider and additional information about palps in the beginning of the behavior section. Finally, I added external links to other Wikipedia pages for terms that readers may need to look up, such as “nectivorous”. ~~ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Delanieludmir (talk • contribs) 03:52, 4 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]