Talk:Dupleix-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 08:16, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

This article is in good shape. A few comments:

Lead

• suggest "The Dupleix-class consisted of three armoured cruisers"
• suggest "the ships of the class were smaller and less powerfully armed" and move the link to sister ship to the the second para
• "Desaix and Kléber exchanged assignments in 1907 later"
• Ottoman Empire is duplinked
• "but in July she struck a naval mine laid by a German submarine and sank" (but the body says June?)

'Body

• comma after "to the Navy Minister"
• "the traditionalists who wanted cruisers"
• suggest "modernists who believed insought armored cruisers"
• link Armand Besnard
• "and that itthe ships needed more endurance"
• the displacement in the body and infobox don't match
• I don't suppose you can link short tons?
• conning tower armor in the infobox "9,100–120 mm"
• intro 3rd DL before using the abbreviation

That's all I could find. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:24, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

• Ottoman Syria is duplinked