User talk:JavaHurricane/Archive 3

Review submission

Hello, I want to make 3 articles, please review.

Draft:Sumit Godara
Draft:Bhamatsar
Draft:Jasrasar — Preceding unsigned comment added by 171.79.176.11 (talk) 07:52, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Someone accepted one article, I declined the other two. I have given some advice for you. Happy editing! Java Hurricane 15:27, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. You might remember that last week I added a piece of information to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fabrizio_Cerina which is accurate and substantiated by various sources (please indicate whether you would like to see them again). I also edited the page in the hope to make its chronology more organic; but I brought no substantial changes to it. A COI was published short after "A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject...". As a professional journalist I would not like to be perceived having conflicts with anyone, which indeed I have not. I'm kindly asking whether after a week of inactivity is there a way to remove such note. I read that "you may simply remove the maintenance template; it will not be removed automatically" but I do not want to be intrusive. Naturally, if you consider that the issue isn't reasonably resolved I will follow further indications. I would appreciate your help. Thank you.David T Cohen (talk) 20:48, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

David T Cohen, okay. I saw it all, and it is unambiguously advertising in nature. I will be direct now - is the person, or someone on his behalf, paying you for writing the article? If yes, read WP:UPE, and clearly note on your user page that you are being paid. Java Hurricane 02:00, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I find your remark offensive and unfair. I'm NOT PAID BY ANYONE TO DO THIS. I HAVE ZERO INTEREST IN THIS EXCEPT MY REPUTATION IN RELATION TO MY JOB. I'm new to Wikipedia and you know that. In fact the news platform I work for (newsgateny.com) wrote in the past weeks about this subject and other 9. I did part of the job and based on what I had learned I thought (stupid me!) a good idea to give my free contribution which is in NO CONFLICT OF INTEREST and which brings ZERO ADVANTAGE to me. Never again! I realize now what kind of mess I put myself in. I would just like to clear the remarks about me. Can you please explain exactly what you don't like and why you move such harsh accusations? Please note that I merely added ONE piece of information (with sources) to an EXISTING PAGE (plus and other minor changes). Please note that this can be damaging my job. I would like to get things straight and get out of this.David T Cohen (talk) 11:17, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

David T Cohen, so does writing a promotional article on someone form a part of your job? I'm sorry if you are feeling offended, but it is clear you are a paid editor. You are writing this article as part of your job, which is classified as paid editing. If my concerns about UPE can damage your job, well, I'm convinced that you are a paid editor. Please reply on COIN. Java Hurricane 12:30, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I did NOT write a promotional article. You are seriously getting it wrong. And I'm really sorry about it as I'm sure you are in good faith. I AM NOT PAID to do this. I do not even know the subject and frankly I don't care. My employer, days ago, published a piece about a bank the subject chairs. I would like to stress that it was NOT a promotional piece. Completely documented and taken from major newspapers like the Financial Time. And IT WAS NOT ME who wrote such piece. I learned news which wasn't on Wiki and believing to do good, I added it to the page. ONE piece of info, that's it. You are talking to me like I wrote the entire page. THE ARTICLE WAS THERE ALREADY. I just added ONE paragraph (with sources). Anyhow, all I care now is to clear MY name and not to damage anyone. I'm going to search for objective sources and trying my best. What is COIN? (Conflict?)David T Cohen (talk) 14:58, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

David T Cohen, Conflict of interest noticeboard. Also, the information you added was clearly unsourced and promotional, and has been removed by another user for violating policy. Java Hurricane 15:01, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

OK. The news was about a new hotel in Milan, Italy. I just re-read what I had added. The tone was not encyclopedic, I agree. Sorry. But it was indeed well sourced: https://milano.repubblica.it/cronaca/2020/01/06/news/cipriani_ristoranti_milano_palazzo_bernasconi-245072068/ and https://forbes.it/2020/01/07/il-gruppo-cipriani-sbarca-a-milano-a-palazzo-bernasconi/ and http://creditdesalpes.com/index.php/cipriani-milan/ What am I supposed to do now? I'd like to defend my position. I imagine it is my rightDavid T Cohen (talk) 16:52, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I just wrote to Cabayi and I'm adding you. I wouldn't know where else to publish this. Please consider carefully my words. This is a very unfair story. I'VE ZERO CONFLICT! NOBODY PAID ME!! I did not and I do not know the subjects personally. But the platform I was freelancing with took your accusations seriously and CANCELED my contract! Do you understand what that means? And you are still joking about that? It is shameful to accuse people just like this. I wanted to hear about Wikipedia never again. But today I was informed that my position has dramatically worsened. The platform is claiming that some editorinvolved also them in this matter. Is it true? Why??? They are saying I caused this and are coming after ME for damages. What did you do exactly? What do they have to do with this? I need to urgently know as I might soon find myself in Court and the lawyer needs to be prepared. This could be a tragedy for me and my family. I've been accused of all kind of wrongdoings because of a stupid edit I thought was of interest as the people involved are well known. Please answer about the platform as per above. I need to prepare myselfDavid T Cohen (talk) 21:30, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

David T Cohen has been indefinitely blocked for sockpuppetry: please see the SPI for more information. Java Hurricane 03:23, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resubmitted

Hello, you have changed the article you declined.

I have changed the Draft:Bhamatsar article, please review the article.

As you suggested to translate Draft:Sumit Godara article into English, you can translate it. So let me tell you that I am new on Wikipedia, I have not yet been given the facility to translate the page into English. And you said biography and career are lacking. So let me tell you, I added as much information as I had. If anyone has more information, it will add more. I also placed the stub in the External Links section. If you ask any page reviewer, then this page will tell you correctly. I am not telling you wrong by saying this. You have a good knowledge of Wikipedia. Only then you are a good page reviewer. I don't mean to say that, this article should be on Wikipedia. I feel sorry for anything you said to me. Please approve. Thank you

I have removed the section "About" "Caste" "Education" in the article in Draft:Bhamatsar. Please review Mr Tejal (talk) 06:44, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A kitten for you!

You are welcome.

Fylindfotberserk (talk) 05:33, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Fylindfotberserk, thanks! Java Hurricane 05:34, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That NewsgateNY editor

Hello! I wanted to leave you a note to explain my thinking on that one. COIN and the wiki is overrun with COI/paid editors. Lately I have tried to focus on what good can be wrought from their work. In the case of the $46 million dollar banker article, the subject seems notable so I cleaned it up. The editor seemed to make a good faith declaration that they were just "doing it on their coffee break". In the absence of other evidence, I am willing to take that at face value. In the end it is enormously time-consuming to chase down these paid/COI editors. If we can get rid of them easily, I will be the first to file an SPI/ANI or whatever report is required. But in this case it looked like too much work to be worth it. Finally, I'm not sure if their "lost my job" statement is real, but if it is it means COI is no longer an issue. Thanks.ThatMontrealIP (talk) 01:46, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ThatMontrealIP, you're welcome! Java Hurricane 05:27, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Review

Hi, I edited the article Harsh Beniwal. As far as I think I have rightly edited it. And then put the submission. But after some time, a reviewer declines. Please see the article Draft:Harsh Beniwal once and tell me what was wrong with the article. Please describe. I am waiting for your reply. Help me create an article Draft:Harsh Beniwal. Mr Tejal (talk) 09:02, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mr Tejal, likely a notability problem. See WP:NBIO for more information. Java Hurricane 09:34, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

help

I do not have much knowledge of English language, so I probably make mistakes in writing articles. I request you to edit the article Draft:Harsh Beniwal. Please edit. I hope so from you. Mr Tejal (talk) 10:09, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mr Tejal, I think I will. I'm busy right now, but once I'm free I'll do some work on it. Also, don't start a new header everytime you reply. You can reply under the previous header itself. Java Hurricane 10:13, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Mr Tejal (talk) 11:09, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mr Tejal, no problems! Java Hurricane 11:11, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Are you free Because I want to make you a Harsh Beniwal article. If you are not free, how long will it be. And when will Harsh Beniwal start writing the article? Mr Tejal (talk) 08:50, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mr Tejal, sorry, someone has deleted the article. Nothing much I can do now. Java Hurricane 09:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

So I make the article back and you edit it. Mr Tejal (talk) 09:29, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mr Tejal, please don't. You can get blocked for persistently promoting people. Java Hurricane 09:30, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

So what should i do? Mr Tejal (talk) 09:34, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

And I did not make this, I just edited. Mr Tejal (talk) 09:38, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mr Tejal, you'll have to contact the deleting admin. In my opinion, it is better if you rewrite the draft in a better way in your sandbox. Java Hurricane 10:50, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I asked you for help in creating this article. But you are back telling me to prepare it in the sandbox. Mr Tejal (talk) 10:58, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is good if this article helps. But I have prepared and wrote Draft:Amit Bhadana (youtuber). Please review and help improve rather than decline. Thank you Mr Tejal (talk) 11:02, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mr Tejal, sure. I think you can add sources from news channels other than Republic, and add a biography for starters. As for that deleted article, I personally think it is better if you don't restart it as a large number of sockpuppets and undisclosed paid editors are involved in the promotion of the politician. Recreating it could lead to blocks. Java Hurricane 11:08, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I request you to edit it. Please please please Mr Tejal (talk) 11:11, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mr Tejal, I will. Don't worry. Java Hurricane 11:15, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Please do it now, otherwise any other page reviewer will decline the article. Mr Tejal (talk) 11:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

And as I expected, this account has been indeffed as a sock. Java Hurricane 03:13, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Frank Cyril Shaw Davison

Thank you for you comments. A lot has changed, I look forward to you thoughts.Mgrodzins (talk) 19:36, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mgrodzins, I think it is in a good shape now. Java Hurricane 17:50, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your help!Mgrodzins (talk) 18:16, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ferulic acid decarboxylase (Fdc)

I accepted the article. Even in the version that you saw, the context was clear enough to anyone who would be likely to be interested in the article. There are many fields I do not understand--probably including the fields for at least 3/4 of the articles submitted to WP--and I try not to review articles in them DGG ( talk ) 00:20, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

DGG, okay, thanks! My main concern was that the article's subject seemed ambiguous, but that might just be because of the usage of some really fancy terms. Thank you! Java Hurricane 02:08, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]