Talk:Oracle Database/Notes
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lede rewrite
Proposed lede
Oracle Database is an enterprise-level database management system developed and marketed by Oracle Corporation. Originally developed as a relational database management system (RDBMS), Oracle has been progressively enhanced to support a wide range of data modeling techniques and data types making it a multi-model database platform. The Oracle database includes a wide array of features to access and manage data, accelerate performance, achieve high-availability, provide security, maintain data consistency, and scale throughput.
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- Suggest we try editting the lede above to an improved version. If you are participating here be aware you maynot get attribution for your suggestions in the final article,Djm-leighpark (talk) 08:42, 31 January 2019 (UTC)
- I am probably sounding too much like a marketing person with use of the word "popular" ( Ccraft us ); Does the market share reference even belong in the lead? ( Ccraft us )
- I think it's best to stay out the market share thing ... it applies actually only at a specific date (and it may even be SQL Server now has a bigger impact now being available on linux?). I removed the marrked share line. Djm-leighpark (talk) 23:12, 31 January 2019 (UTC)
- Cutting out the multi-model reference. The lede is generally not meant to have references but should be supported by the article body which should have the references. To be totally strict the multi-model claim needs to be supported by an independent source.
- I am thinking of a neat way of trying to say where people say 'Oracle' or 'Oracle DBMS' they are usually referring to this product, despite the fact Oracle also has stewardship of over 5 other databases!Djm-leighpark (talk) 23:33, 31 January 2019 (UTC)
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