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Shannon's Peer Review

Your article is very well structured and has a good leading section that is able to be easily understood. Good use of links to other articles for references to different topics. I would possible add another image to go with the section on models of hyperbolic geometry of an example of what you are explaining. You could possibly also add images to show what a hypercompas, horocompass, parallel ruler, and hyperbolic ruler are and help people see what the differences are. The content is written very well and neutrally. I think you do a very nice job laying out the different cases for constructing an angle bisector. Nice coverage of material and very good balance of information. Visuals would be a great add in to the constructing sections, but definitely not need because you do a very nice job explaining the content. For Monge's Theorem, I think adding the proof would balance out the material in the theorems section. Overall very nice job and great sources they are very reliable. The sections that you separated your article into is very well structured and flows nicely.