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Reviewer: Bellezzasolo (talk · contribs) 15:41, 27 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Well written

The article seems generally well written. There were some parts that stood out as in need of basic copyediting, which I duly did. There was also a MOS:ORDER issue with the portal bar, which I have also fixed. However, there is a MOS:FIRST issue. The sentence says "is a consequence of". It should probably describe the issue, not what causes it. That could be moved to the second sentence.

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