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This is the current revision of this page, as edited by Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk | contribs) at 05:46, 3 May 2017 (explaining who I am :)). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this version.
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Hi, I'm the content expert for your course and your professor asked me to leave you some feedback.

Good job on this section. I modified some of it to fit Wikipedia's WP:MoS a little and I also added in the researchers' full names. My only concern is that you only have one source for this section and it would be better if you could find 1-3 more sources to back up the claims in the section. Other than that, this looks good. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 05:46, 3 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]