User talk:Clarefc/sandbox

Since there isn't any content yet for the article, I can't make any comments on the material. However, from the list of ideas the structure of the article seems very clear and organized. The definition of Grashof number might be more beneficial for the article to be put in the introduction rather than in a separate section. The notes are very clear, but do need to put under the sections mentioned in the ideas to organize them more and add more content from different sources. Overall, this is a very good and solid start to the article.H walaa (talk) 07:31, 16 February 2017 (UTC)