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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Carbrera (talk | contribs) at 21:41, 13 June 2016 (GA Review!). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 16:41, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox

  • The image of the "Overview of the WNS architecture" needs an alt image description; please add one

Lead

  • Remember: Anything that is mentioned in the lead needs to be mentioned in the article; the facts about "it was first supported on Windows 8 and subsequently on Windows Phone 8.1 upon its release." is cited wonderfully here, but it needs to be brought up in the article as well
  • Same with Reference #2 please

Technical details

Design and compatibility

  • No source for the "The service changes are expected to be released alongside an anniversary update to Windows 10." statement

Architecture

  • Great work; nothing to add!

References

  • The "Reflist" parameters should be changed to "Reflist|30em"; please do this to prevent extra space in this section
  • Overlinking issues:
  • Reference #2 – Unlink "Microsoft" please
  • Reference #3 – Unlink "Microsoft" please
  • Reference #8 – Unlink "Microsoft" please

End of GA Review:

Short and sweet: a good and quick read! Great work! The article will be placed on hold for seven days to allow for any changes to be made. If you have a question for me regarding this review, feel free to @PING me and I'll respond and I'm sure I will respond swiftly. Thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 21:41, 13 June 2016 (UTC).[reply]

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