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Sarps 95: This is an interesting and good article. Although, you may want to elaborate on what you are writing. Re-read what you wrote, it is interesting but needs more details. The sources are not a problem. I know you mentioned you had problems finding sources, these are good sources, and very well explained. But, if you can find more that would be great. Apart from that, it is good. Explain what you have, I understand doing research on a female director, who produced and directed two films is tough. But, just elaborate on what you have. Keep up the good work.