Talk:Mathematics and architecture/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:26, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This is something new to me and a truly interesting topic. Will snatch this! Sainsf <^>_{Talk all words} 04:26, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"Buildings" is linked twice. Do we really need a link for this? Even if this is an architecture-related article?
" Islamic architecture" is also linked twice
One may not understand spatial forms at once.
from the Pythagoreans onwards How long ago would that be?
You may link "mausoleum", "hyperbolic"
conveying a message about Hindu cosmology Leaves the reader wondering what the message would be. Could you add a word or two on that? Else remove it and mention it only in the main text.
What does "secular" convey here? In whose opinion are they so?
I wonder if this needs AE or BE. We have instances of both in the article. An FAC issue, though ...
Ancient Rome "A" needs no caps if "ancient Egypt/Greece" don't do either
At the end of the nineteenth century Put it in either words or digits throughout the article. Elsewhere you say 21st, not words.

I think this section should be called "Connection between fields"
Michael Ostwald and Kim Williams Who are they? You can add the author info from the cited source.
connected, architecture I think we need a semicolon or hyphen here
architecture being a profession concerned with the practical matter of making buildings, mathematics being the pure study of number and other abstract objects I think we can use "while on the other hand" or something to bring out the contrast more effectively. Commas seem lackluster.
being the pure study of number Number"s"?
the extra syllabus became the quadrivium of arithmetic, geometry, music and astronomy Should this rather be "the quadrivium of arithmetic, geometry, music and astronomy became the extra syllabus"?
Link antiquity, geometry (only at first mention, presently linked at the second one), grammar, logic