Talk:Mathematics and architecture/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:26, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This is something new to me and a truly interesting topic. Will snatch this! Sainsf <^>_{Talk all words} 04:26, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"Buildings" is linked twice. Do we really need a link for this? Even if this is an architecture-related article?
" Islamic architecture" is also linked twice
One may not understand spatial forms at once.
from the Pythagoreans onwards How long ago would that be?
You may link "mausoleum"
conveying a message about Hindu cosmology Leaves the reader wondering what the message would be. Could you add a word or two on that? Else remove it and mention it only in the main text.
What does "secular" convey here? In whose opinion are they so?
I wonder if this needs AE or BE. We have instances of both in the article. An FAC issue, though ...
Ancient Rome "A" needs no caps if "ancient Egypt/Greece" don't do either
At the end of the nineteenth century Say "19th" if you say "21st" and not "twenty-first" (a bit earlier)