Talk:Roderigo Lopes/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 10:05, 4 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'm Calvin999, I am reviewing this nomination.

to poison the Queen. → You've already said Queen Elizabeth, so I'd recommend 'her' to avoid repetition.
The lead is too overly detailed for the size of the article, especially the third paragraph. I feel as though I don't need to read on because you've told me the essentials already.
He graduated BA under → What do you mean? He received a Bachelor of Arts?
and tithes in → ?

That's it! On hold for 7 days, but I doubt you'll need that long. — Calvin999 16:22, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]