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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by NinjaRobotPirate (talk | contribs) at 17:13, 4 June 2015 (Great work!). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Great work!

... is it a good idea to post feedback here?

Nice work. I think this is a really useful document. I have some suggestions already - I'll respond in more detail later.

Would you object to me editing the document directly? It's well written already, but it'd be nice to set an example and make this really clean, sharp prose - for example, you can delete "In order" from your first sentence... ;) Popcornduff (talk) 16:03, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Popcornduff: Thank you for the kind words. Sure, you can edit it. I was initially going to write it more ironically, but I changed my mind. There may be a few ironic sentences left. Also, my first draft is usually quite messy, so it wouldn't be too surprising to find a few unintentional instances mixed in. NinjaRobotPirate (talk) 17:13, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]