User talk:Lacmaboingo
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Carleton College
I think your lede is ok. Ideally, you could one or a few sentences summarizing each of the main sections of the article. A lede can appear promotional and fluffy if it is mainly about say the ranking of the college. People want to know about the college and its history. Ranking is only one of the things. Cheers. --I am One of Many (talk) 23:42, 3 May 2015 (UTC)