Wikipedia:Featured article review/Java (programming language)
Review commentary
Not enough citations. Ideogram 08:21, 22 June 2006 (UTC)
- There are two many external links too, which should maybe be put in a separate article. -- Grafikm (AutoGRAF) 08:50, 22 June 2006 (UTC)
- Criterion 2a is not met. Examples:
- "compilers by compiling"
- "Note that, although there's an explicit ..."—Please don't tell our readers what and what not to note.
- "$20M"—New Zealand dollars? Which court gave the order?
- "success at that goal"—"at"?
- Some commas would make for easier reading.
- "Although it is indeed possible"—Avoid "indeed" in this register.
- "the burden of having to perform manual memory management"—Remove the three redundant words.
And much more. Please clean up the whole article. Tony 08:33, 4 July 2006 (UTC)
FARC commentary
- Main FA criteria concerns are citations (2c) and quality of writing (2a). Marskell 16:47, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
- Remove three weeks, negligible edits, no change in citations and prose, no indication anyone is working on it. Sandy 03:33, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
- Remove. Someone's had a poke around it, but none of the substantial problems has been addressed in all of this time. I notice a prominent "The above example merits a bit of explanation." Tony 02:05, 22 July 2006 (UTC)