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Java programming language

Review commentary

Not enough citations. Ideogram 08:21, 22 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

There are two many external links too, which should maybe be put in a separate article. -- Grafikm (AutoGRAF) 08:50, 22 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Criterion 2a is not met. Examples:
    • "compilers by compiling"
    • "Note that, although there's an explicit ..."—Please don't tell our readers what and what not to note.
    • "$20M"—New Zealand dollars? Which court gave the order?
    • "success at that goal"—"at"?
    • Some commas would make for easier reading.
    • "Although it is indeed possible"—Avoid "indeed" in this register.
    • "the burden of having to perform manual memory management"—Remove the three redundant words.

And much more. Please clean up the whole article. Tony 08:33, 4 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

FARC commentary

Main FA criteria concerns are citations (2c) and quality of writing (2b). Marskell 16:47, 9 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Talk messages left at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Computer science, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Programming languages, and Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Computing. Sandy 22:51, 16 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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