Talk:Objectivity/DB

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Still like advert?

Does anyone feel the 'reads like an advert' tag is still required? For other tags, I removed the Cleanup tag because that looks OK to me. Are there some comments on further work it needs? RJFJR (talk) 20:55, 30 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Although I am a technical writer at the company in question, I have updated the article to make it current and accurate. It was languishing in a stale state due to inactivity, probably because of the size of the company and the level of specialization of the software. Several of the links for references were 404, and the latest functionality of the Objectivity/DB software was not included. The article has two issues listed at the top that were added in 2010. I believe those issues were addressed quite some time back, as indicated by the comment above this one. I am hoping for some confirmation that the current article is ready to have the issues removed. Or, if changes to the article are needed first, that would be welcomed as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 12.207.23.2 (talk) 15:51, 2 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Jjrenzel: Thank you for disclosing your affiliation and asking for feedback. I assume you the same person as user Jjrenzel?

I don't think those issues are addressed, and your edit makes it slightly worse. It's very easy to find problems with this article, main problems being the overuse of adjectives (WP:PEACOCK), vague claims (WP:WEASEL), stating subjective opinions as facts (WP:POV) and general tone that tries to sell the product, rather than describe it neutrally (WP:TONE).

For example, blurbs like "data intensive or real-time applications that manipulate highly complex, inter-related data" belong to marketing brochures, but not Wikipedia.

Claims like "Eliminating the relational Join operations inherent in a relational database gives Objectivity/DB a marked performance advantage, in orders of magnitude." are inherently subjective and debatable -- I believe removing joins from the database simply pushes them to the application, which is a net loss in performance and increase in complexity. It's best to avoid such statements in the first place and especially if you are affiliated with the product. If they are to be described, they need to come from a published reliable source, preferably independent of the subject, and the claims need to be attributed to the source (WP:YESPOV).

And then there are dishonest claims like "Many RDBMSs manifest a view of the results before returning any of them", if it's implying that no results are returned until the whole query completes?

My advice, if you want to arrive at a neutral article without these tags, stubify it: ruthlessly delete everything that's subjective or does not come from an independent secondary source. This may sound counterintuitive to building a good article, but we're after quality not quantity. -- intgr [talk] 21:36, 2 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'm impressed with the speed of response! Wikpedia runs like a well-oiled machine.

I'm not comfortable with deleting a lot of original material that I didn't author, but I would like to try to address your feedback and make appropriate changes where I can. I will remove some of the items you have identified as having a marketing orientation. I can add several references that talk about how in object databases, objects can store references to other objects, which is how joins are avoided. Thank you for taking the time to provide the feedback -- Jjrenzel (talk) 18:36, 3 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, but things often don't work this fast, I just happened to have this article on my watchlist and take an interest in getting rid of advert-ish articles.

Don't be afraid to edit things, see WP:BOLD. Old content can always be seen/restored from the article history if people disagree with you. And you have my support to stubify. -- intgr [talk] 19:11, 3 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I have been invited to comment, but I'm not sure what I am meant to be commenting on. I will comment anyway.

The article reads like a marketing brochure, using promotional language, and fails to explain what the product does. The second sentence "It allows applications to make standard C++, C#, Java, or Python objects persistent without having to convert the data objects into the rows and columns used by a ... RDBMS" is not helpful. I have written C++ applications with persistent objects, and it never occurred to me to convert them into rows and columns, or indeed to use a database at all. Maproom (talk) 08:21, 8 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comment Most RfCs have a Support/Oppose section (sometimes they're separated) and a Discussion section. This makes it easier for the closing editor to determine consensus. Ca2james (talk) 06:27, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose removing issues tags. Most contributorsdo have a close connection with the company and the article does read like a promotional marketing brochure that extolls the virtues of the product. While a brief description of the product is useful, the article really needs to ~~discuss what makes it notable~~ neutrally state facts about the product. I couldn't find a whole lot of reliable sources for this article so I'm unconvinced that it should even exist. I know it was up for AfD many years ago but I'm not sure it would be kept now; does it meet the software notability guideline? If not, it would be better to have an article on the company itself and to include the most notable facts about this product there instead of having a separate article for the product. Ca2james (talk) 06:38, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Just a comment, if you ask people to "discuss what makes it notable" then you will end up with exactly this kind of bad article, with WP:PEACOCK statements etc. To the contrary, you should encourage people to only state neutral facts about the subject. -- intgr [talk] 14:08, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you - I didn't think about that when I wrote the above. I've rewritten my sentence above and struck out the previous writing. Ca2james (talk) 14:32, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Added two more references

Added two more references to support new material. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jjrenzel (talk • contribs) 16:44, 2 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

(I modified this to a level 3 heading, to make it subordinate to the RfC. Unless there's some reason for having this in a separate subsection, you might consider refactoring to remove the heading and move the comment into chronological position within the RfC discussion.) ‑‑Mandruss ☎ 00:08, 14 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]